An interesting fic, and I am glad you are againstnthe twin pairing bit *shuder* that is so sick. I have a twin and I love her but never would I dream of that type of...relationship.

And I have to agree with you on some points you have made and disagree with others. I hope to read more suikoden fics from you.

You're really good at this!
Reading two peices, it sounds like you're suggesting letting Leknaat pick that flower was the alternative to cutting down a rose that would have overgrown.. Hehe.

This was a more flowery piece than many other fics I've encountered on here. All in all, simply beautiful! I like the inclusion of Latin (my favorite). You put whatever trash I wrote a while back into shame! And you know what, this is such a believable piece because there was the inclusion of gray areas. I'll have to put this fic in my favorites! Thanks for sharing it! :)