WoW... 8)
I loved it!
Haha and I love the song :P
Really well done :P

Perfect! LOL her dad should have been beaten up by someone other then Orochimaru like Gaara in the Cannon But Temari works here!

lolz, I Hate 'Him' Damn Mean-Ass!

Wait... you wrote that? That sounded so convincing! JK! Lmao!

It was rather good though.

Here's the criticisms.

Edit out your spelling mistakes better, you did well. Also, maybe tell us that they were back stage at the beginning, so we'd know.

For once... This goes on my favorites!

go temari!! beat that jerk! woot! :D