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amjackson25
2009-07-11 . chapter 13
WOW! that was an AMAZING STORY. i love the fact that's it's a dark angle xover. it's so creative. i CAN"T WAIT until you update please do! i'm BEDDING you to. PLEASE!
Kaito Seishiro
2008-10-14 . chapter 13
This very good

Seishiro hungry want to eat
Hotgirlow
2008-09-03 . chapter 13
can't wait till this is updated i loved it a lot it was great.
Morgomir
2008-08-04 . chapter 13
Don't worry, great to have you back. Keep up the good work.
Allen Pitt
2008-08-04 . chapter 13
it's interesting that at least one of Lily's witch friends knows...wonder if she'll survive the war... might be someone HP could get info from someday. HP as a halfbreed is a weird concept, could play into the 'power he knows not' thing...
Should make Dumbledore's life even more interesting...
Hotgirlow
2008-06-18 . chapter 12
cool loved it and i can't wait till Lilly tells james about manticore though.
Flaca514
2008-06-14 . chapter 12
luv the story and like the idea of lily being brought back to manticore, gives it more drama
Allen Pitt
2008-06-14 . chapter 12
I'm against a 'captured by manticore' subplot, as it would take up several chapters that would be a digression from the James/Lily romance thing. ie the Marauders follow & liberate her, maybe obliviate everybody who took her?
I'd love for there to be at least a few duplicates of her, so the readers of this fic will start hoping that it wasn't actually Lily who got killed that night...maybe she got recaptured, and Voldemort burst in and killed one of the team that got her?
Morgomir
2008-06-14 . chapter 12
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Morgomir
2008-06-11 . chapter 11
Great story. I can't wait fore the next installment. Keep up the good work.
Allen Pitt
2008-06-06 . chapter 11
Hopefully Cordy will talk sense into her before James attacks Seth...
Touch of the Wind
2008-06-06 . chapter 11
Excellent! I love Seth...
Sir Spamalot
2008-05-21 . chapter 10
This is really good! I love how you combined the two. UPDATE SOON!
: )
Touch of the Wind
2008-05-18 . chapter 10
Excellent update!
Allen Pitt
2008-05-18 . chapter 10
Funny to hear Seth calling a castle full of witches/wizards "Ordinaries" but I suppose it's all relative .
I have to admit, I'm really hoping Lily doesn't die somehow, that maybe an X of the same series dies instead & is mistaken for her. oh well. Interesting to think that HP might be 1/2 transgenic & that's the "power he knows not..." of the prophecy...also he'd end up with a lot of transgenic supporters if they knew about him..
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