Good start, would love another chaper, especially if there is fluff, love B/B fluff!

omg i was sobbing... lol your a HORRIBLE HORRIBLE PERSON lol just kidding god that was amazing ... ive read alot of max death stories but DAMN~! it was great and i dont know if you shouolod put in another chapter its great alone but if thre was more who knows?? it migt be even better\
;]- Zoey
;} - aka nono

good chapter. like that she used matthew brennan no max keenan. its good she went back and booth was there for her as always! definitely add another chapter of fluff she deserves some. look forward to more soon

I like how it ended.

add add add !

Hey, what can I say? Cookies tempt me :)

Good stuff. Like the ending. :)