this is a great story so far, i am not able to read the rest as of right now, but i will hopefully soon.

BEST CHAPTER! GO PROWL!

So cute. And I love Soundwave's comment about them *finally* together. Smart Rumble.

And I have to agree with Jazz. The image of Prowl launching at Soundwave in anger just because he only wanted to protect Jazz as a bondmate.

best prowl/jazz fanfic i have EVER read... its a shame jazz didnt get to keep his new found doorwings though :p

This is still one of my favorite Transformers fics EVER.

Also, I have been suggesting you to... pretty much everyone I know who has seen the Transformers movie (despite Jazz only being in the first one and Prowl being in neither) and they have all been immensely pleased, although whether they've reviewed is hard to say. But.
Just mentioning again that you're awesome.
(And how does robot interfacing manage to be hot? I don't think that makes any sense at all. And yet.)

Yay I loved it all the way. This delightful gentle romance. You gave me so much. Thanks.

AW! A sand castle!

There is so much to love about this chapter... sneaky!Prime, Rumble, Soundwave...

And that last paragraph...

*sniggersnort* Yes, much to love here.

AW ^__^ Sexy Robo-ai. This couple is so cute ^^

Aww, what an adorable story! One of those that makes you all warm and fuzzy inside...

While the combination of "door wings" and "extreme sensitivity" is nothing new as such (and yes, I've used it myself several times), you've put a lot of thought into it, putting a very detailed and creative spin on the whole concept. Very impressive!

I also enjoyed how you managed to intersperse the fic with so many delightful humurous little tidbits. I especially loved the "Opinion: about time" comment... :D

AH!

XD

I LOVE IT!

FUNNY!

XD

I think I enjoy the sneaky sneaky Primes... XD

Poor Prowl though; having to go under for the entire ride... XD

Laughing too hard to comment.
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On second thought, call a medic.
I think I might have broken something from laughing.
XD
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Try listening to (I think it's) Kate Perry's "I kissed a girl" while reading this.
ABSOLUTELY HILARIOUS!

8D Very wonderful and sweet fanfic!!

Meow~ Hotness, poor Jazzy, Prowl can be a real teaser!

this was really good!