ayn rand sucks ** in hell.

that said, this isn't terrible. not really interesting ether but whatever. compared to most of what's on this site, its ** shakespeare.

Neat chapter. I like the crossing with Fruitsbasket. Very cool

It's great to see this story updated and overall, I like it. I find your story very fascinating.

Thank you. You were very amusing. :)

Oh, and if friends of that ** Hannah Sue Bus Dude Robinson asks, no, I did not find their PMs worthwhile. That is why I didn't bother replying.

xoxo

BOO.

(/screwing around)

So I liked it, Casa. Quite good, quite good! Yes indeed. I'm a big Double D fan, and he and Wendy , even though I didn't see much of it, have a somewhat interesting chemistry together. It makes me want to see them together (even though I'm not too optimistic about how a romantic relationship between the two would turn out in the long run).

I'm not familiar with Rin, nor am I with lolita, but I'm willing to wait it out and get a feel for both before assuming I won't like it.

I also don't know what Ayn Rand is...

But anyway, I think you seem to have a pretty good handle on Double D's character.

It's a little early for me to start giving tons of concrit, but my only piece of advice has to do with your including lolita. I don't have a problem with it if you do, but I would advise that you not to make it so strong and detail-and-inside-joke-laden an element that is described in such a way that we would have to go off and do research to know what you're talking about it. In other words, I don't mind if you include lolita, I actually look forward to seeing some more styles of it, just don't make people who are new to it feel too left out. Do you get what I'm saying? But I don't think you'd do that, it's more of a reminder.

Anyway, I'll stick with your story. I'm especially interested in seeing their stories meet. :)

Good chapter and nice use of the French language, I think you got the French grammer right.

Nice. This chapter is really neat. I like how you put French into it. It was really good. Very witty and interesting. Keep it up! ;)

This is interesting. I like how this is a very unique story in the cartoon x-overs section. I really want to see more in this story. Keep it up! :)