I couldn't stop laughing while reading this. A great story.

Oh I absoulutely Love this story it was so funny it nearly made me cry And that is saying somthing. Loved it thought i'd tell you.

I laughed till i cried...

want moore!

XD

Haha i loved that!

Funny story. Loved all the characters, and the plot. Hope you do more.

This is a lovely little ficlet little domestic details and a good dynamic between all the characters.

hi this was so totally(is this spelt right im having trouble spalling at the mo)awesome it also made me laugh. loads. and loads. can you plz like tell me how you upload stuff on to here cuz i have no idea. i would really apreciate it if you would. thanx
luv sammy boo

love it! absolutely love it.

haha.. lol.. that was hysterical.. poor jonathan.. very comical situation.. It was great... Thayet was really good in this story.. Nice job!

Caiti

Loved it! All the characters were perfect and it was a great idea.

P.S. I liked the disclaimer too..haha.

Oh dear. Poor Jon. What a nice thing it is to see him made a royal idiot. It made me smile. Just like your disclaimer did!

Hehe, but truth, I really do love your work. It is amazing and this oneshot just proves it even more! Huzzar for you

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hehehe-LOVELOVELOVE your disclaimer. i think im saving that as one of my favourite quotes! lol. very funny-its nice (in a good way, of course) to see jon mess up once in a while, and he must be SO comforted to know that his friends are with him all the way...laughing at him! :P great fic, well done)

lol very funny, poor Johnathan!

wow i can scarcely write for laughing this was very funny!