wow...great chapter...Charlie really is an idiot...but you gotta love him, especially the way you write him...lol...Tonks better be in charecter next chapter! hehe...

Very good start; would like to read more. Keep up the good work

hehe, like Kelly, "You're fired"

oh well, not too bad, this chapter is always a bit boring, you know, all the names and sortings and stuff...meh

over all good job

wow. Lin seems nice, but a bit, odd, overconfident, kind of. Still beliveable though. Alec will probably seem cooler/nicer/friendlier with out his older sister hanging over him at every minute. And do your pal a favor and put Tonks in for a bit. Please?

Up-Date

Soon

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Nice job getting in to Charlie's mind. By the way you said striked fear into me, i think it's struck fear into me. Still good. By the way, those two other stories, you never work on them either. Good luck with this one though, you've got a great start.

This sounds like it's got potential. I've always thought Charlie was an interesting character, too... shame he never played a bigger role in the books, though :(