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Reviews for: Disenchanted
Mira
2008-04-27 . chapter 3
Oh, I liked this a lot! And it went really well with the songs.
Nightmaric
2008-04-12 . chapter 3
First off, yay to you completing. I'm a little sleepy at the moment, so forgive me for not betaing right now.

I was really just skimming through but from what I could absorb, the story's pretty well off. Fitting to the lyrics as usual. Relax a little more in your style of writing, perhaps. You type stiff, my posh friend. XD
metsrock
2008-02-23 . chapter 2
I love mcr! update soon!
Rictumsempra
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
I think you captured this perfectly, all three characters. You did a wonderful job - can't wait for the next chapter!
Hermione W. Cullen
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
I have to say, I like this. I especially like how your portrayal keeps Dumbledore relatively innocent in the whole thing, since I'm Dumbledore's [person] through and through. Bravo.

You might want to be careful with Aberforth, though. Watch that you don't go OOC, cuz it looks like it could be heading that way.

Still, great work.
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