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| Sharidaken Tranqity 2008-05-20 ch 12,  | abuseFinal finished this chapter up, and may I say you did an awesome job at the ending. Very great, if you need help with the sequel just let me know and I will help you out with editing, ideas, etc. |
| Sharidaken Tranqity 2008-04-27 ch 11, | abuseGlowworm, that was a good chapter. I love how everyone got back together and defeated Evil Lilo, Evil Stitch and her evil guards. But you know, here's a thought of view. If you wanted Mariko to use her vectors and keep it K+, you could have had them vanished like dust just how they do it in Samurai Jack and not have them shed blood at all and that could have been better. But who care's, it's your story. I think it sounds good the way it is. Also I've decided to put you in the story a little bit sooner than I expected. I don't know why thou, but I believe you'll be appear either 18 or 17. I'll have to see. Also are you a memember of Deviant Art by any chance? |
| JeanKazuhiza 2008-04-27 ch 12, | abuseWoohoo! Great Story. |
| tomboyishgirl108 2008-04-27 ch 12, | abuseAww, I'm glad Lucy and Inuyasha (and the other couples) are together! :D Bravo! Nice story! |
| Lucky Girl Dragon Wielder 2008-04-27 ch 12, | abuseYahoo! Great ending GW! Nice job! |
| Mermaid Ninja 2008-04-27 ch 12, | abuseWill the role of Prince Charming be played by Kikyo in the sequel? |
| Wormtail96 2008-04-27 ch 12, | abuseAlas, A happy ending. Evil Lilo and Evil Stitch got gobbled up by a dragon and Lucy and InuYasha are in love! Nice job. |
| Neros Urameshi 2008-04-26 ch 12, | abuseI love happy endings! Now Inuyasha and Lucy are off together to have the time of their lives! Congratulations on a great parody! Inuyasha/Lucy forever! |
| Tales-of-a-Sloth 2008-04-26 ch 12, | abuseXD What a wonderful ending. Aww, Aeta made them a carraige. Guess she's really a big softy, eh? XD Aeta: Watch it. ^^; Anyways, wonderful story, and a wonderful ending! :D |
| Tales-of-a-Sloth 2008-04-26 ch 11, | abuseXD Lots of witty dialogue here. :3 Loved it! And yay! You used my "Henry-dragon flies eveyone to the wedding" idea! XD Loved the little speech with Mariko and Henry before he ate them. Henry: (rubs soap on tongue) I'll never ever get that putrid taste out of my mouth. XP Aww, poor baby. (pats Henry on head) Wonferful job! :D Looking forward to the next part! |
| Neros Urameshi 2008-04-26 ch 11, | abuseHooray! Evil Lilo is dead! Inuyasha and Lucy are gonna get married! Please continue! |
| Lucky Girl Dragon Wielder 2008-04-26 ch 11, | abuseWoo hoo! Go Henry! Nice work guys! One chapter left! Update soon GW! |
| Tales-of-a-Sloth 2008-04-25 ch 10, | abuseAw. :( Very sad chapter. Poor gang and Lucy. I liked the joke at the end with Nyuu and Edward though. XD It lightened the mood. Thanks for updating this! :D Good luck with what happens next! |
| Lucky Girl Dragon Wielder 2008-04-25 ch 10, | abuseAh man! That song almost made me cry! Good chapter GW! Update soon! |
| Neros Urameshi 2008-04-25 ch 10, | abusePoor Lucy, misunderstanding Inuyasha and breaking up with him. Now Evil Lilo is gonna marry him. This stinks! Please continue! |