the start was very good 'the race' but then it really suck!

i think that adding a bunch of OC kinda makes th estory confusing.. and its kinda awkward how theres magic and immortals in a high school fanfic, but o well, i guess its ur fanfic XD ys every1 nice to sasori but so cruel to hidan and itachi!!?? Q.Q poor itachi.. (sry itachis my fav character) plz update soon!

love the story so far! but the amount of OCs kinda makes it confusing.. pzl dupate soon!

love hte story so far! plz update soon!

OMG! irene is a **! sakura has pretty pink hair! GRR! plz update soon!

love the story so far! plzupdtate soon!

love the story so far! sasosaku is such a cute pairing! but hiding in a trash can.. not exactly the smartest thing.. plz update soon!