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Reviews for: Shishido, the JanKenPon King
Midnightxwolfx
2009-06-13 . chapter 1
Haha! I totally remember watching this! It was so funny! XD
Judge Claude Frollo
2009-04-17 . chapter 1
This was cute, I guess. But I think it could be written better. There are grammar errors, but I love the story, in general.

Somehow, I have a feeling this had happened, and Konomi left it out.

Thank you for sharing.
Sandy11-1990
2009-03-29 . chapter 1
THIS. IS. SO. LIKE. THE. DREAM. LIVE. 3RD. BACKSTAGE.

XD but it's so nice to read it AHAHAHA since the video was only like less than 2 mins xD thank you for writing this! shishidoXchoutaro all the way~

lol this never fails to "lol" me XD
M3lanch0ly
2009-01-11 . chapter 1
LOLOLOLOL!! THE ENDING WAS LIKE THE LIVE MUSICALS!!
Nasty Evil Dead Dog
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
OH GOD. LOL.
YaoiIsLove
2008-10-10 . chapter 1
Yay tenimyu...Date owned KenKen it was hilarious. You made Gakuto like Aiba-chan not wanting to get hit and constantly pulling away. Aiba-chan has no luck with Jan-Ken-Pon. But Kazuki only got hit on the arm when he lost. You made Atobe get hit on the forehead...lmao. XD that was great.
Minnie Mouse
2008-03-05 . chapter 1
I love the fic, one of my favorite pairings. Wouldn't mind a sequel where Shishido manages to get his revenge. Keep writing.
mesmerizedbyceruleaneyes
2008-02-25 . chapter 1
HAHHAHA. Shishido, the jankenpon king. and who knew that choutarou could be so manipulative? XD

how about writing a continuation where shishido makes a comeback? it might be interesting. LOL.
The Night Owl is Addicted
2008-02-24 . chapter 1
Cute ^_^

Except for a few grammar mistakes, the story over-all is very enjoyable. Everyone was pretty much in character.
Though at first I was confused about the game, but that was my problem because I didn't bother looking it up XD But I got the idea of it soon enough upon reading more.

I like how you concluded it with Shishido's new resolve in redeeming his position, but I think the paragraph that included Choutarou's point of view (the second to the last paragraph) could have been done a tad better. Still, it was nice :)

A nice read ^_^
~Gelly
Hikari
2008-02-23 . chapter 1
Ah, I remember that backstage fondly...^_^
I like this Hyotei-rendition of it a lot!!
shadowkaru15
2008-02-23 . chapter 1
xD Lovely story! Thanks for putting so much effort in it!
man, i didn´t know Ohtori could be that scary...
with love - fred
2008-02-23 . chapter 1
Oh my God, that was amazing. I loved that TeniMyu backstage. XD It was amazing. But you did make one mistake, though:

- “Jan-ken-pon!” Oshitari sighed as Shishido’s scissors beat his rock. -

Scissors don't beat rock. D:

Though...later on, you did make it so that the other win said that rock beat scissors, but still. xD Just letting you know.

It was a great story! I'm glad you wrote it! Good job!
itssoMELISSA
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
LMFAOO XD. You totally got this from the tenimyu backstage dincha? Heart it! Shishido's/KenKen's reign and defeat
Dollar1
2008-02-22 . chapter 1
LOVE IT!!

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