 Midnightxwolfx 2009-06-13 . chapter 1Haha! I totally remember watching this! It was so funny! XD |
 Judge Claude Frollo 2009-04-17 . chapter 1This was cute, I guess. But I think it could be written better. There are grammar errors, but I love the story, in general.
Somehow, I have a feeling this had happened, and Konomi left it out.
Thank you for sharing. |
 Sandy11-1990 2009-03-29 . chapter 1THIS. IS. SO. LIKE. THE. DREAM. LIVE. 3RD. BACKSTAGE.
XD but it's so nice to read it AHAHAHA since the video was only like less than 2 mins xD thank you for writing this! shishidoXchoutaro all the way~
lol this never fails to "lol" me XD |
 M3lanch0ly 2009-01-11 . chapter 1LOLOLOLOL!! THE ENDING WAS LIKE THE LIVE MUSICALS!! |
 Nasty Evil Dead Dog 2008-12-14 . chapter 1OH GOD. LOL. |
 YaoiIsLove 2008-10-10 . chapter 1Yay tenimyu...Date owned KenKen it was hilarious. You made Gakuto like Aiba-chan not wanting to get hit and constantly pulling away. Aiba-chan has no luck with Jan-Ken-Pon. But Kazuki only got hit on the arm when he lost. You made Atobe get hit on the forehead...lmao. XD that was great. |
 Minnie Mouse 2008-03-05 . chapter 1 I love the fic, one of my favorite pairings. Wouldn't mind a sequel where Shishido manages to get his revenge. Keep writing. |
 mesmerizedbyceruleaneyes 2008-02-25 . chapter 1HAHHAHA. Shishido, the jankenpon king. and who knew that choutarou could be so manipulative? XD
how about writing a continuation where shishido makes a comeback? it might be interesting. LOL. |
 The Night Owl is Addicted 2008-02-24 . chapter 1Cute ^_^
Except for a few grammar mistakes, the story over-all is very enjoyable. Everyone was pretty much in character.
Though at first I was confused about the game, but that was my problem because I didn't bother looking it up XD But I got the idea of it soon enough upon reading more.
I like how you concluded it with Shishido's new resolve in redeeming his position, but I think the paragraph that included Choutarou's point of view (the second to the last paragraph) could have been done a tad better. Still, it was nice :)
A nice read ^_^
~Gelly |
 Hikari 2008-02-23 . chapter 1 Ah, I remember that backstage fondly...^_^
I like this Hyotei-rendition of it a lot!! |
 shadowkaru15 2008-02-23 . chapter 1xD Lovely story! Thanks for putting so much effort in it!
man, i didn´t know Ohtori could be that scary... |
 with love - fred 2008-02-23 . chapter 1Oh my God, that was amazing. I loved that TeniMyu backstage. XD It was amazing. But you did make one mistake, though:
- “Jan-ken-pon!” Oshitari sighed as Shishido’s scissors beat his rock. -
Scissors don't beat rock. D:
Though...later on, you did make it so that the other win said that rock beat scissors, but still. xD Just letting you know.
It was a great story! I'm glad you wrote it! Good job! |
 itssoMELISSA 2008-02-22 . chapter 1LMFAOO XD. You totally got this from the tenimyu backstage dincha? Heart it! Shishido's/KenKen's reign and defeat |
 Dollar1 2008-02-22 . chapter 1 LOVE IT!!
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