I love thet story but whats up with the funny odd chs??

Um, how to say this without being mean... Ok, constructive critisism. One, Max would never ever tell Fang he was hot, especially not infront of the flock. She's just not like that. At the end of book 3 they're not even together. What the hell? Gazzy ate Angel? Another what the hell. The spelling and grammar sucks. Ever heard of spell check? Yeah? Use it? Iggy isn't spelt I-G-G-I-E it's spelt I-G-G-Y. Gosh. Have you even read teh books? That's not even a real cliff hanger, Iggy didn't like, have anyreason at all to run away. Besides, you didn't build up any suspense.

what the hell

Wtf is this?

? what in the heck are these crazy chappies in between?

WTF?!?

Uhm... I'm confuzzled about every alternate chapter, like this one XD

Good moring, this was much appreciated by those with noses. Good health to you.

Heeheehee...

This story is amazing.
I love it.
Update soon!

-Mare

okay, so the weird things between the chapter get on my nerves. the real writing is awesome though.

the writing part is cool, but what is the point of this other stuff?

i really want to but i cant i just cant read any more whats going on every other chapter is great and the rest well to be honest its pure shit SORTE IT OUT YOU WANKER!

thats not how you spell iggie you idiot i can barly spell and i know that its IGGY and that chapter made no sence you are a discrace to writers everywhere!

I will beg you please oh please
stop posting this in between chapters
I just gawh Freaking hell
just add them to the actually story after you type it
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hell maybe thats why you don't have many reviewers
I mean look at the first chapter what am I supposed to think
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