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| FantasyFan5 2008-03-01 ch 3,  | abuseEs muy bien, chica! :D I'll be waiting for more! |
| WhisperingHeartache 2008-02-27 ch 2, | abuseAww! I lurve it already! I hope you update soon! |
| Zhara 2008-02-26 ch 2, anon. | abuseVery short, but impacting. Remember, length doesn't make a story. Its the impact. Very nice concept. I like the feeling you have placed between Lina and Doon. I look forward to reading updates. Keep up the good work and be careful not to fall into the many pits that so many other authors do. Don't write words just to fill space; write them because they have a purpose and a meaning. If you ever begin to lose interest in your story, don't press on because you feel you need to. Nothing is worse than reading a story that is deprived of all life because it's creator is boured with it. Do everything you can to give your story colour and sumptous life. Don't be too wordy, but place meaning and information where its needed (and wanted!) You have done well. Keep it up. :) Zhara |