A great story. Very good.

That was astoundingly beautiful...i don't know what else to say. I started to cry for susan, for the longing she had in her heart for her family, for her Savior.
It was beautiful.

Your writing is full of beautiful imagery. I appreciate how you've honed in on the centrality of the Christian theme, as that is the central theme of C.S. Lewis's writing.

Yes, this is one path that Susan could have taken. Narnia ruined her for this earth, as much as it did for her siblings. So now she is in the waiting room for Narnia...in a way, it's too bad she didn't understand that she was in this world for a reason, and never looked for it. Our Savior didn't sit around and wait--he looked for things to do and people he could help.

But this is a very good story.

Wow. This was absolutely gorgeous. You clearly have a poet's heart. I haven't read anything like this on fanfiction yet. Bravo!

I love OneSHots, and this one was totally great!

Absolutely beautiful. The little details mixed with something far greater, awesome!

This is beautiful.
You really captured the Christian spirit of the Chronicles of Narnia. I have read several Susan-after-the-train-crash fics, and I liked yours because it is relatively short and simple.
It's very well written, and I think you should write more Narnia fanfiction.

Mm, gave me chills. Good ones.

Very, very deep, and very well done indeed. Good for you, to be unashamedly loyal to the true High King above all Kings, Narnia or otherwise.

Well done!

I really like this! It's a fabulous Idea. It's very well written but very sad.