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Reviews for: The Ashes of Alterus
sheppardkid
2009-09-28 . chapter 6
I'm really liking this sequel! It's interesting and goes at a very good pace. It's an easy read and keeps my attention. However, I do have 1 problem with this story. It seems that there should've been more of the SGA side of the story already. So far, you've focused mostly on the SG-1 side. My advice would be to do a little of both at any given point (i.e. if one chapter is SG-1 then the next could be SGA). I'd really like to see more of the SGA-side developed along with the SG-1.
heyster1
2008-06-15 . chapter 6
It's nice to know authors are still writing stories after the end of the tv series. Well this story is set in season 10 but still this story is very interesting. I don't mind if it stays in the sg1 universe or it adds a crossover to the story. I just like all of the advancements and in this story it is the Baals. cool idea. I will continue reading this story. Please keep writing.
HAZMOT
2008-06-14 . chapter 6
Interesting how both the Ba'al and Adria were pitted against each other. Obviously the real Ba'al has found a way to gain some of Adria's powers. I wonder if it has anything to do with Vala? But anyway, now we know this is going to be a battle of wills and skills concerning our two most nasty nemesis. :D
Jenwryn
2008-05-05 . chapter 5
Okay, so now what are they going to do?

*taps foot impatiently*

I know you don't think this is as good as your ESiv fic, but I'm really enjoying it so UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
HAZMOT
2008-05-05 . chapter 5
I think Vala had a plan in being captured by Ba'al. It was too easy and Vala is not the stupid type. I think she knows Ba'al better than anyone, since she was once a host to a Gou'ald and now I think she has an oppertunity to help SG1 capture him or know where he may turn up next. This is so exciting, what's the next move? heheheh :D
Jenwryn
2008-04-07 . chapter 4
Neat - I particularly like the thought of super Ba'als... muhahaha! *grins*
Scyphi
2008-04-07 . chapter 4
Heh, I don't even the Ori stand much of a chance against even just ONE super-Baal. Get a whole crowd of them together, and well, they've got it in the bag. It'll be interesting to see how SG-1 will handle it. :)

Keep up the good work. :D
HAZMOT
2008-04-07 . chapter 4
Well with several Ba'al involved, it's no wonder it's a party. Now we know it was a trap for SG1 in the beginning and leave it to Vala to save them, once again. But we wonder what is Ba'al's interest in all this. I must of missed something and need to go back. But old Adria was foiled again and if Ba'al has anything to do with it, it seems Adria may be out of power soon. :D
HAZMOT
2008-04-01 . chapter 3
So far, I'm hooked and another mission for our dear SG1 along with SGA's help. The biologist that disappeared and then found dead with tiny little teeth marks was unnerving from the last chapter, and now sending SG1 down to stop the Ori with Adria's added voice in Vala's head is not a good thing. Obviously, the Ori already knew they were coming. I just hope they are not moving into a trap. It's plain to see that they do not trust the Tok'ra, and for them to do their dirty work, makes no sense. So, I guess I'll have to wait and see what happens next. Goody. hehehe :D
Jenwryn
2008-03-31 . chapter 3
Oh my goodness, I just had this sudden thought - did you send me the draft of this and ask me to get it posted for you? Did you? If so, I am a terrible, terrible, TERRIBLE sister. I don't have any of the old girl's mail, either, so can't even check. *feels bad*

Either way, I loved this chapter. As always, Vala is my favourite, I adore how you write her and even though she just pokes her head in now and then, she has a real presence. And... Adria?
Scyphi
2008-03-05 . chapter 2
Okay, a good continuation of the original story. Looking forward to more. :)
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