Great story!)

Great Story! I really enjoyed reading it!

Nice. I liked the whole Drakken and Ron doing exactly what they were told not too. Loved the love potion number nine take off.-Kate

woot woot! I loved this story and the ending! I say you should wirte more Kigo storys like this. :D

Nice one. I enjoy KiGo most of all. Why? I have no idea.
Men cry not for themselves, but for their comrades.

this is a good story. you should write more kigo

NO NO NO! KEEP GOING! I NEED MORE!

GREAT STORY!

UPDATE SOON SON!

Hmm, a pretty strange ending indeed. So are the chemicals still affecting Shego and/or Kim, or is KP actually cheating on Ron? I hope it isn't the latter, because then all of Ron and Kim's meaningful talks about their relationship in the first 4 chapters would turn out to be empty.

The Drakken, Wade and Ron bits were funny, although I really have a hard time picturing Ron watching KP and Shego going at it. His love and consideration for Kim should have certainly stopped, but I guess you just can't win against those hormones!)

Sorry for the extremely late review, RL's been a pain. Anyways, besides the HLS (which was done quite well XD) the chapter was pretty good. We get to see Kim's determination to try to save herself for Ron in the flashback, and Ron trying his hardest to keep the girls apart until they have some privacy was kind of funny too.

The aftermath of the 'deed' was quite satisfying in that, while Kim and Shego were grossed out by what they had done or wanting to do it again, they did gain some respect for each other. Who knows, they might end up being friends.

Very nice ending with everyones little secrets. You had to think though this wouldn't have happened with only Rufus being a spectator.

not really a strange ending at all, a bit...wimpy...but not strange. Strange would be something like giving Kim plasma powers and ending with a look for the sequel notice...this is just...well...a fade to black ending. Leaves the reader thinking that the obvious is going to happen...in public this time (go you)...and then they will continue some of their more...clandestine...meetings until they are outed at which point they spend the rest of their lives together, happily dodging random GJ agents and doing whatever they want...typical KiGo, you just decided not to bother finishing the cliche D

Well, it was a pretty good story. I thought your ending was a bit weaker than normal but still good over all.

I was glad to see they went easy on the boys, at least they didn't have "cups to the door" as it were (at least to begin with).

The parts I wasn't so sure about were Ron letting Kim go off on her own. He's only let that happen once, and bad things ensued (I forget the name of the episode right off), and that was because he had prior commitments. Then the fact Kim was cheating on him, with Shego; and Ron, Drakken and Wade being the ultimate pervs, Drakken I can see (assuming he thought there was no way Shego could catch him), Wade is more than likely a pr0n addict (the kid spends way too much time in his room on a computer), but I have a little trouble picturing Ron doing something like that.

Those are my "I'm not so sure" thoughts... things that made me scratch my head.

However, I am intrigued that you had Kim and Shego getting back together, and am curious whether it's leftover chemicals or if they both had an epiphany and are doing this under free will. And even though you say "complete" I'm curious how Kim is going to break this to Ron, especially after all the long talks they've had with each other about this sitch.

All in all, keep writing, and I'll keep reading.

I stopped reviewing after the first couple chapters because it appeared you weren't writing KiGo. KiGo, despite what some people think, is not primarily about sex. It is about developing a relationship between the two characters. (The hard part is trying to develop a relationship without doing a huge amount of violence to their personalities.) You had the two wanting sex with each other for purely chemical reasons, there was no relationship neither one desired it rationally.

Very fine last chapter•Ron/Drakken interaction was wonderful, easy to visualize.•I liked the ambiguity of the ending. Leave a little to the imagination.

But...

It's pretty, but is it KiGo? Supposedly sex would cure the two of their chemical addiction to the other. They do appear in possession of their rational faculties there at the end. However, if they're cured it appears you've fallen into a common KiGo shortcoming not doing enough to explain why their perspective changed. And if it is still some sort of residual chemical reaction it still isn't real.

KiY

Lol, this was great. Very original.

For your first foray it was great. I like the end and how you leave it up to the reader to some up with the ending.