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| Hanson's Hot 2008-07-03 ch 56,  | abusehahaha!! Awesomeness. Sorry I haven't been around in a while, I finally got my appetite for 21 Jump Street back ;-) I love these so much, you always manage to write Hanson and Penhall so freaking well. Especially Penhall, the way you write him is just fantastic. Great job, I love them (as I mentioned before and probably in every review prior to this lol). |
| andaere 2008-06-15 ch 49, | abuseLOL. You have the perfect balance between angsty and humorous. =) I think most all of your drabbles have made sense... Oh, and about running out of words... well, you're almost halfway through with this (one hundred drabbles, almost fifty chapters, get it?) anyway. But here are some ideas: hot, sexy, chocolate, wild, crazy, silly, stupid, oranges, pet, sleepy. xD I don't know where those came from... (Well, I know where the "hot" and "sexy" came from - thinking of Johnny and Tom. xD) |
| andaere 2008-06-11 ch 44, | abuseAnd I thought this would be all serious... ;) I'm glad to see that you're updating these again! Keep writing! =) |
| andaere 2008-05-10 ch 41, | abuseAwh. Stubborn Tommy. ;) |
| andaere 2008-05-03 ch 40, | abuseAw, cute. Finally some fluff! Good idea to give up on the definitions. If I were you, I'd only do them on the "hard" words, or the less-known ones. For example, everyone knows what "cold" means but not all people know what "claustrophobic" means. =) |
| andaere 2008-04-18 ch 39, | abuseGood, interesting idea! Just want typo that I, being my grammar-freak beta-ing self, must correct: "everybody began to understood" should be "everybody understood" or "everybody began to understand". =) |
| Hanson's Hot 2008-04-14 ch 38, | abuseThese are all so awesome I love them to bits. You're a fantastic writer and I'm sorry I haven't been around all that much to review these amazing chapters. My fave part was this: “Yeah, but I liked these jeans,” Tom pouted. “And I never gave you permission to wreck them.” “Yeah, and you never said I couldn't.” lol very Penhall. Great work I look forward to reading more xx |
| andaere 2008-04-13 ch 38, | abuseAw... I never saw Nemesis, all I know about it was that it was orginially written for Johnny's character (Tom) but he didn't like the idea and refused to do it. (Johnny sure was a problem child way back when...) Anyway, good drabble! The last line especially was very good. =) |
| andaere 2008-04-12 ch 36, | abuseLOL. I like this. Very in character! |
| andaere 2008-04-11 ch 35, | abuseAw... I'm thinking Harry... =( You write so well! |
| andaere 2008-04-11 ch 34, | abuseAww... =( I never saw Blackout, but I heard about it. From what I heard, I just think that Johnny Depp was SICK of 21 Jumpstreet by then and wasn't even trying to act well, but I dunno... The weird ending does give us writers material, though, eh? xD |
| Hanson's Angel 2008-04-05 ch 33, | abuseUm, no lie, but I actually felt myself welling up when I read "Empty" (and that rarely happens to me when I read stuff). Seriously consider turning that one into a full-blown story. . . And "Lied" was awesome as well, but I am a Booker freak so anything with him will get my antennae up. . . |
| andaere 2008-04-05 ch 33, | abuseWhoah, dang, six updates in, like, one minute? COOL! xD I love all of these. I especially liked the ones set after Draw The Line (that's one of my favorite episodes). Great job! |
| andaere 2008-03-15 ch 27, | abuseHehe. Me likey. Cute. =) |
| Chick On Wheels 2008-03-14 ch 18, | abusehaha that was pretty rad :P Secret works well too. |