 marislily 2009-01-29 . chapter 1Somewhere not on Earth works too, right? Like the pegasus galaxy:)
It was really nice read. I like the way you came up with all that, I'm surprised I wasn't thinking ugly thoughts toward Nancy. |
 Ronon'sRascal78 2008-08-23 . chapter 1This was beautiful! I always wished that they had put more of John and Nancy's backstory into that little scene at the funeral.
Thank you for filling in the blanks :)
Suzi |
 LadyJane08 2008-05-26 . chapter 1Absolutely fantastic. I loved everything about this story- Nancy's perspective, the backstory, the impression we get of John... Just, wow. |
 Sera and Tails 2008-05-11 . chapter 1What a marvelous fic! It's really rare to find a piece focused on relationships that is actually written with a mature, realistic perspective (as opposed to the mass of juvenile het crap that's out there) Beautifully rendered and rang really true.
Cheers,
Tails, of Sera and Tails |
 SaJi 2008-03-11 . chapter 1Wow, me liked. Very nicely done. |
 bananafangirl 2008-03-09 . chapter 1This is actually a really great look at Nancy and John. I don't usually expect much from stories that focus on John because very few people bother to try, or succeed in, getting his personality right (myself included). But the way you told it from Nancy's view and how their marriage fell apart is all very much like him. I'm impressed. |
 Lady Lemons 2008-03-04 . chapter 1aw, cute.
Loved the amazingly huge amount of backstory you created. Wow!
'Kay now I've got the annoying U2 song stuck in my head. Thanks! so much!! Kidding of course, song's not bad--just right now at 11:17pm.
Anyhoo, I liked the fic so great job and kudos to you,
Lemons |
 TheNaggingCube 2008-02-28 . chapter 1wow. wonderful, really really wonderful. great read.
Well done too. |
 LinziDay 2008-02-23 . chapter 1Holy cow!! That was beyond excellent. Amazing backstory you've created here and amazing job with the characters. (I like your Nancy so much better than the little bit of Nancy we got to know on screen!)
Loved this: "So she asked him about the realism of Top Gun, and ended up in John's loft at three A.M., sitting on his couch while he kept pausing the tape to illustrate aerodynamic principles with his empty beer bottle and the VCR remote."
Great details, wonderful descriptions. Loved the whole thing! :) |
 Annie866 2008-02-23 . chapter 1Gods, that was beautifully written. Loved how you wrote the back story of how John and Nancy came together, and the slow breakdown of their marriage was heartbreaking because you just wanted it to somehow work out. Voices were totally in character. And that last part where Nancy hoped that John could find that place where he's at home, was just poignant. Because, I think with Atlantis, he has. Thank you for sharing! |