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Reviews for: Still Haven't Found
marislily
2009-01-29 . chapter 1
Somewhere not on Earth works too, right? Like the pegasus galaxy:)

It was really nice read. I like the way you came up with all that, I'm surprised I wasn't thinking ugly thoughts toward Nancy.
Ronon'sRascal78
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
This was beautiful! I always wished that they had put more of John and Nancy's backstory into that little scene at the funeral.

Thank you for filling in the blanks :)

Suzi
LadyJane08
2008-05-26 . chapter 1
Absolutely fantastic. I loved everything about this story- Nancy's perspective, the backstory, the impression we get of John... Just, wow.
Sera and Tails
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
What a marvelous fic! It's really rare to find a piece focused on relationships that is actually written with a mature, realistic perspective (as opposed to the mass of juvenile het crap that's out there) Beautifully rendered and rang really true.

Cheers,
Tails, of Sera and Tails
SaJi
2008-03-11 . chapter 1
Wow, me liked. Very nicely done.
bananafangirl
2008-03-09 . chapter 1
This is actually a really great look at Nancy and John. I don't usually expect much from stories that focus on John because very few people bother to try, or succeed in, getting his personality right (myself included). But the way you told it from Nancy's view and how their marriage fell apart is all very much like him. I'm impressed.
Lady Lemons
2008-03-04 . chapter 1
aw, cute.
Loved the amazingly huge amount of backstory you created. Wow!
'Kay now I've got the annoying U2 song stuck in my head. Thanks! so much!! Kidding of course, song's not bad--just right now at 11:17pm.

Anyhoo, I liked the fic so great job and kudos to you,
Lemons
TheNaggingCube
2008-02-28 . chapter 1
wow. wonderful, really really wonderful. great read.

Well done too.
LinziDay
2008-02-23 . chapter 1
Holy cow!! That was beyond excellent. Amazing backstory you've created here and amazing job with the characters. (I like your Nancy so much better than the little bit of Nancy we got to know on screen!)

Loved this: "So she asked him about the realism of Top Gun, and ended up in John's loft at three A.M., sitting on his couch while he kept pausing the tape to illustrate aerodynamic principles with his empty beer bottle and the VCR remote."

Great details, wonderful descriptions. Loved the whole thing! :)
Annie866
2008-02-23 . chapter 1
Gods, that was beautifully written. Loved how you wrote the back story of how John and Nancy came together, and the slow breakdown of their marriage was heartbreaking because you just wanted it to somehow work out. Voices were totally in character. And that last part where Nancy hoped that John could find that place where he's at home, was just poignant. Because, I think with Atlantis, he has. Thank you for sharing!
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