Loved this story!

I love it!

Hehe! John squirming was fun to watch, it was so funny to see him all uncertain and nervous, we don't usually see that side of him! Great job!

I loved this story. Thank you. Now, continue...

:D I'm grinning away! I absolutely love this! Great sequel or stand alone, and I love Ronon and Evan's contibutions lol! And SPARKY! :)

I love this. It was cute and funny. You captured their personalities so well. :)

-Chicky

Much with the cute! (TBC?) ;)

Aw- I loved it! I was smiling for the whole time while reading this

That was hilarious! Ronon and Lorne were fantastic...I loved how nervous John was and how Elizabeth answered with no hesitation. Great job!

I have just one little problem with this: Why is everyone calling Elizabeth a "girl"? She's not a girl. She's a WOMAN! Calling her a mere girl seems somehow disrespectful.

Awgh! That was super cute! Great job!

Lol! I loved that! Especially Lorne in the whole thing teasing John and going off to get a good view point! And I definitely think you should do a threequel showing John and Elizabeth on their date. ;)

I agree with the others, you have to continue this! That was so lovely. Uh, and such an evil Lorne! :D I loved the interaction of the men that was really entertaining! :D

Is this going to continue? Will we get another installment? please?

Eek! This is so, so, so fantastic! The Lorne/John/Ronon interaction is very in character, not to mention funny.

You're going to do the date now, right? With John get ready and being nervous.

I LOVE LORNE! *steals him*

May the Spark be with you! Lol!