did tose two did 'it'? sorry. my brain's a bit slow

OBTAINED (stolen) XD haha dat made me laugh!

good fic! left me with a small smile on mi face

It's cute but... Incredibly OOC. /

Cute!
And I had no idea that that song made no sense whatso ever... no wonder I could never understand anything but the chorus...

This pairing is alright. It is. Even though Neuro/Yako is my OTP, I can tolerate it(unlike SasaYako.
But this fanfic was...

VERY OOC on behalf of Godai, Yako, Neuro and God forbid, Yako's mother.

The concept of her becoming a drunk is ridiculous, as is the thought she would ever strike poor Yako. As a loving mother and a woman who lost her husband, the thought of her hurting her daughter is beyond pointless. Try thinking of motives behind the characters and rationalizing them with actual references to the character. And Yako is definately not a weak girl who is unable to keep herself up on her own and require others to support her. She wouldn't just stand in the rain and sob...AND, even if that was said, Neuro is -always- there for her and if something was wrong he'd know. And Godai the pedophile...what?

...WHAT?

WHAT?

The end kinda creeps me out...-ahem
The doctor would like to perscribe a re-read of the entire manga, then a rewrite of the fanfic.

This is a good concept, but very poorly executed. Signed,

Aw!

Now i'm inspired to write GodaixYako!

Thank you!

It was very cute!

Oh, I LIKED the ending of that one! So like Neuro...

How cute! I thought they would be a couple or something... Sharing an umbrella is considered a very couple-y thing to do, very intimate. 3

I like this pairing, too. Third only to Neuro x Yako and Sasazuka x Yako. :D

AW! how cute If i didn't find the pairing of Neuro and yako so interesting, this pairing would definitely be my favorite. You did a good job)

deliciously interesting