Very interesting so far. I like how you intertwine all the character's stories with each other. Very cool.

this is great! Axel's hilarious! please continue this!

OMG I love this story already!! PLEASE continue!!

Haha, Axel was pretty funny in this chapter. I can't wait for the next one! Especially waiting for any akuroku-ness soon, haha.

I know how you feel zex. I hate rainbows too. xD Such a bad gay guy am I. Loved it.

So you DO like Zemyx!
For a long time I wasn't sure you did.
Great as always too.

Zex doesnt like rainbows, what is this?
lawls, lawls, lawls, lawls, lawls.

*is a squee attack*

VERY good chapter from Zexion's perspective.

I really like the way you role the characters. They really suit the actual /character/ rather than the plot's needs. Skills from a true writer. :)

Thanks for updating, I love the story, and ESPECIALLY your writing, so I really hope you get a chance to do so again soon!

Thank you!

-disney

only axel would use an analogy as crazy as that!
:D
great job!

I'm so glad I took the day off today and had the chance to read this story; I've enjoyed every part so far. You're doing incredible.

XD I like, how Demyx uses the world 'like' a lot. Like... its really in character :3 XD

OMFG FREYA -

RE0 8GYEGB9REGYP9tg8ebbp97re08re

f08reygergreg

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r08 ygre
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JUST THE WORD... E! GO FREYA!11ONEONEONEONE

“Actually, as everyone already knows, Larxene and Demyx are about as compatible as a …a sea slug and a …dinosaur or something. Horrible analogy, I know." - No Axel that was quite good actually XD

I picked up a spelling error D: Here it is:

'...from Great Britian’s noblest of...' - 'Britain'. :3

“What you have to do is get your freaking game face on, and your A game up and hop on your blonde lover boy before he skips his merry way into …into …no sunshine without my gay and happy rainbow boyfriend land.” - XD brilliant -gigglesnort- I love your Axel XD

I was really starting to get a headache now. “You seriously didn’t just say that right now, did you?” I looked at him and sighed, “Not all gay people are flamboyant and love rainbows, Axel.”

“You don’t like rainbows?” Axel asked, grinning widely. - Even more so XD

Great update! :3

OMG!
I loved it.
It was so funny and sora is so...silly at times. xP
Then again I'm kind of like that too...

This is a really good story so far, and I can't wait to see more. =]

i dont really... quite remember... what happened before this chapter...

Whoa, what took you so long to update?

XD Every time you mention something even REMOTELY Jewish gets me giggling. This is why I love being Jewish so much... |3