Aww, that was so beautifully written.

I loved this part:

The big one had now noticed the smaller ones, which had completely forgotten about them. “To our right.” Jack murmured, seeing the open space, as they all sheathed their cutlasses. “On the count of three. One…two…two and a half…two and three quarters…”He whimpered… “Three.”

The coundown made me laugh.

i also liked this bit:

“What are you smiling about?” She questioned suspiciously.
“There’s something I need to tell you, Lizzie.”
She stared at him, amused. “You’re pregnant?”
He snorted. “fraid’ not, luv. Something much more serious than that, something possible and possibly troubling if you don’t like it.” He said.

I laughed so much as i could just see this bit happening in my head.

Great job, definately a favourite :)
xxoxx

GREAT story with a lovely ending! I really enjoyed reading it :)

another beautiful installment