NO way in hel would that have happened good story though

Wow. That was so beautifully written. Nice job.

I almost cried. It's so sad! God, it's so sad...

Sad but excellent!

That was depressing, but well written.

Whoa.. that was good. Very good. Nice job!

good story!It just proves that Neal Kel could never be she loves Cleon that's the way it's supposed be,although I think TP is gonna kill off CANNOT happen!Ok,so I'm a die hard K/C fan.I did like your story!

interesting...strange...i am just discovering these fanfics, and this is the first. very kewl!

I liked it, kind of depressing though... Poor Kel...

SNIFF SNIFF WAHHHHHHHHHHHH! SO SAD! REALLY GOOD THOUGH!

Morbid. Perfect. I loved it.

ooh...I like the whole queenscove/mindelen thing. I'm glad she ended up with Neal, even though I don't REALLy want her to. Cleon deserves to drowned. If I had enough money, I would buy another copy of First Test, Page, and Squire and tear out every page that mentions Cleon. ooh...I hate that boy.

Poor Kel, talk about depressing!

Wow, I love it. Very beautiful. I was wondering if you would bring up love and marriage I never expected what you did say. Poor Kel. You really made me feel sorry for her and for Cleon.

depressing and lovely as always Juniper...