 Shelbypf 2009-10-23 . chapter 1Awesome! You're a great writer |
 Hikari 2008-08-05 . chapter 1 A very sweet one-shot :)
it's a bit sad and very touching.
love the ending.
a beautiful story |
 PearlaH.Sweden-Arigatou- 2008-05-04 . chapter 1OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO SWEET! T__T i love stories like these!!
ichiruki!! yay!! :D
pearla-chan |
 Final Fight 2008-04-03 . chapter 1Egad! That was rather sad... |
 angelic93 2008-03-29 . chapter 1OMG its such a great day i saw the sweetest AMV ever and now i readed the sweetest fan fic ever
sweet = touches my stoned heart XD
love it keep writeing |
 Queen of Juiceboxes 2008-03-10 . chapter 1He lost his life a long time ago.
I love that line. I mean, c'mon its true!! If Bleach ends with Ichigo no longer being a shinigami, well that will be retarded. I've actually always wanted to write a one-shot based on Ichigo finding Rukia's real grave, but you beat me to it! Really, this was wonderfully written. The characterizations were spot on, especially Rukia. I could picture everything she said to Ichigo so easily. Keep up the good work, and thanks for reviewing for my stuff!!
-QJ |
 adelea 2008-03-08 . chapter 1Aw. Sweet! :) I really liked this. |
 Hachimitsu-sama 2008-02-26 . chapter 1Wah ! It's so cute |
 Kendricks Alashane 2008-02-25 . chapter 1Aww thats sweet those two should always be together it just seems so right , any way loved your one shot i hoep you will right more fics that soon that i can read and enjoy. |
 ConversationOverTea 2008-02-24 . chapter 1Wah, That was so angsty and DEEP x]
Thank God Rukia came back ^^
She really completes him ^^
Anywhoo, thanks for the story, I loved it |
 Izari-Hime 2008-02-24 . chapter 1that was...wonderful. i loved it so much. that story was too beautiful to remain a oneshot i can tell. i really hope that you will consider making a sequel or turning it into a multi-chapter fic. keep up the great work i adore your writing :) it really brings out the emotion in people and thats what shows in a wonderful writer
Izari* |
 A.D.D.Vengeance 2008-02-24 . chapter 1wow... I thought she was dead! Oh... well, i lurve happy endings. and conspiritorial ones too... hm... Thank you! |
 2008-02-24 . chapter 1 HOLY ASDFGHJKL; that was like the best one shot I've ever heard xp if it were a series I'd totally be reading it xp |
 LoverofLove 2008-02-24 . chapter 1I think... that I love you... No, scratch that. I DO love you! And I won't take it back, so don't question it! When I began to read the Author's note I was surprised and my face made an "aw" face. You know what I mean? I felt honored and that I was doing something right. Haha. Plus right now its almost 4 in the morning and to get that reaction out of me at this time is no easy feat. So kudos to you for that!
I have to say, for a one shot, this had some major depth. And for a one shot, it was pretty damn incredible. I can seriously see how your writing has grown. It's amazing, honestly. Your details are uncanny, characterization is perfect and even the slightest bit of suspense goes a long way. I believe you've accomplished all of this. Also, you are portraying so much more emotion. You should know that I love that.
Rukia leaving, Ichigo depressed- I think you know I'm a fan of that. And I do love flashbacks. *wink* I don't know what else to say; kinda in awe at the moment. This was great work. I love it. And you can never go wrong with Rascal Flatts. Song is amazing, nice choice. And you said it amazes you how I can do it? Well you have clearly done it as well, my friend. :)
The ending was cute though. I didn't expect it. I figured it wasn't going to end to hot, but it did indeed end on a positive note and for that you also get credit (for doing the unexpected). Again, you are amazing. Remember that! As usual, I'm looking forward to more of your work. |
 d'Anima 2008-02-23 . chapter 1Oh, this was lovely. Try reading this while listening to the extended Happy Ending/Over my Shoulder song by Mika. It changed to Over My Shoulder about wear Ichigo went to the graves...and wow, that got me started.
Thank you for such a lovely story. It's helping me with my Ichiruki fix while I want for ANYTHINGGOODTOHAPPENINTHEMANGAKUBOYOUWHORE. So thank you soso much. Well written, and it fitted to the characterisation smoothly, but it varied enough so that it wasn't a same old plot. I quite liked the part about the graves - I haven't read anything about Rukia's or Hisana's graves before, and I think that idea could be extended greatly.
Thank you. |