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| Silent Moon 14 2008-06-04 ch 8, anon. | abuseLoved it! Please update soon! |
| Death angel chick211 2008-04-13 ch 8, | abuseNice chap.I know you'll write`cause you usually do.Talk to ya next time I review.(Well you know what I mean) -Emo death angel |
| Death angel chick211 2008-03-25 ch 7, | abuseThe end of your chapter kinda confused me a little there but besides that it's fine.You got the name cloud from one of your other stories didn't you?If so than I'm okay with that`cause I'm probably gonna make Kya be my main character in almost all my stories.(Oops off subject)ANYWAYS please write more.Talk to ya next review.(Or if ya reply which knowing you ya probably will) -Twirling Zakura |
| Rainpath 2008-03-25 ch 7, | abuseGood chapter! You're really getting better with description! |
| Death angel chick211 2008-03-24 ch 6, | abuseYAY FOR CLIFFIES!SO where's the person from?Anyway you have alot of cliffies and-as you already know I'm obsessed with em.So please write more and expect no flames from me `cause your story is to good for them.I`ll review again soon. -Twirling Zakura |
| Death angel chick211 2008-03-24 ch 5, | abuseOoh another cliffie keep um comin `cause I love em. -Twirling Zakura |
| Death angel chick211 2008-03-24 ch 2, | abuseYou've heard of the All American are like one of the best bands EVAH!ANYWAY hope everyone else is enjoying your stories as much as I am.Hope ya get lots a good reviews too! Bye -Twirling Zakura |
| Rainpath 2008-03-01 ch 6, | abuseThis chapter was a LOT better, really nice improvement here. |
| Rainpath 2008-02-25 ch 4, | abuseAlright, this is bit confusing, but I think I can grasp it. You've got a good start, just be sure to clear thngs up in your writing so the readers know exactly what's going on. |
| Post-It Note Soap 2008-02-24 ch 3, | abuseThe first chapter kind of confuzzled, but oh well. I like it! |