 Soma 2009-09-22 . chapter 6 PLEASE CONTINUE!
This is the best zamus fic I've seen in a long time, and I'm sad it's been such a long time since the last upadte. Please continue this fic |
 DarkndAngel9 2009-06-07 . chapter 6LOL! that was so wrong!! i knew what they were doing but i didn't at the same time. i had to keep reminding myself that this was rated T for teen. lol but woah!! so many ideas came to mind especially when you mentioned the others! i was like "Zelda! what?! no! wait.. no!" lol oh how wrong you are for that lol :D
anyway Lyn and Florina are cute hope to see more of them! can't wait to see some brawling action. how are the others gonna react to Samus's suit. Zelda and Samus should definitely fight! that would be cool! but then it won't be because Samus might snap at Zelda if she lost and that would be not cool. lol at Zelda's hip thrusting xD those hologram spheres are so cool!! i want one!! and hmm i wonder who slapped/punched Pit? demon girl? really can't wait for the next chapter! (but the update thing says complete is that right?! no!) and sorry for my randomness with this review just though you'll like to know what i was thinking throughout this whole chapter! i love this story this chapter alone made me lol soo many times!! the others were funny too but this one was my favorite!! :3 hope to hear from you!...soon? |
 Greki 2009-04-26 . chapter 6You know. It was because of this fic that I played Fire Emblem and got totally hooked into it. Gotta thank you for that. Lol, and great teaser, btw. Just awesome! xD Btw, you're from the DF, no?
Como andan con la Influenza? Aca en Monterrey ya nos suspendieron las clases, tambien. |
 Greki 2009-04-26 . chapter 5It's interesting to see how you made Zelda more efficient than Samus in such circumstances. I like it, especially because it adds to that frustrating charm of hers! xD |
 Greki 2009-04-26 . chapter 4I wonder how Zelda knew... I'm dying of curiosity here. |
 Greki 2009-04-26 . chapter 3Lol, that was a cute chapter. It certainly was. I love your Nabooru! |
 Greki 2009-04-26 . chapter 2Never played Metroid, so I wonder what's up with those three. |
 Greki 2009-04-26 . chapter 1I can't believe I haven't reviewed this before, even though I've read it many times before. I certainly love the way Zelda and Samus's friendship starts. All sweet and natural and not dramatic. Great! |
 0xnaomix0 2008-09-27 . chapter 6hahaha! i LOVE this fic~! i'm so glad to have read a zelda/samus fic! this is SO VERY wonderful and i cannot wait for the update!
please continue because this is so very interesting and there's just nothing like it!
i really like your writing style and the way you portray the characters, it's very unique.
keep up the wonderful work! (and don't keep me waiting too long. haha)
-naomi |
 UglyDucklingForever 2008-06-09 . chapter 6AW man... I gotta wait for another chapter... well... yeah... |
 UglyDucklingForever 2008-06-09 . chapter 1English isn't your first language? I couldn't tell untill you said it yourself. You only made mistakes everyone makes, no matter how long they've known the language. Damn good job.
And, aside from that. I do like the story. Glad to see someone made zelda into the hardcore/not really hardcore personality person that i believe her to be. And the needles, nice of you to work sheik in there.
I'll read it all in one sitting!
-faving- |
 ranma hibiki 2008-05-12 . chapter 6*cackles* good chapter, though i think im going to have to clean up after the nosebleed from the heavy innuendo's of the massage
xD |
 mastersmith 2008-05-06 . chapter 6good to see another chapter. ha, you fooled me with the beginning.
Strange thing is, part of my mind tells me I'm not supposed to read anything with lesbians in it but I usually ignore it and read it anyway.
I really don't know where the story is going next but it should be entertaining. Are Lyn and Florina from a particular game or did you make them up? Have a nice day. |
 grant117 2008-05-06 . chapter 6I really like your writing style. honestly save a simple grammatical error or homophone confusion I would not even know english was not your primary language. I donot believe I have reviwed you since "kidnapping a princess" but I hope to make up for that. you have done a grat job with this syory thus far and have had my rapt attention and eagerness awaiting the release of your new chapters. I would like to offer you my serbices on anything you would like story related, I've given up trying to write myself for the moment but there is no reason I cannot help you. just send me a reply or a p.m. if you get the time.
sincerely,
grant
p.s. what did happen to kdnapping a princess? I miss thst story it was a very very good one. one of your best in fact. |
 Darkamber8828 2008-05-05 . chapter 6Princess Peach. FEmale Diamond/Pearl Pokemon Trainer. Maybe Pikachu. try those. |