Wow! Don't know if I read the original but i like this one!! Alice is so confusing and downright weird. =D I don't really know what to think of her. i can't wait to see what happens with Roy and Ed, with his disorder. Haven't seen the panic disorder too many times before. Update soon! I'd like to see what happens next.

Where the HELL is the EdRoy?!

Liked the prologue and the first chapter. Alice does appear to be an important component of the story. Seemed Roy was thinking of Ed and Roy's feelings but was too drunk to remember Ed. Good start would like to see where you go with it.

Nice start. Like to see where you go with it.