|Reviews for Slash's Musings|
| The Legendary Zero 4/10/09 . chapter 1
| Argus264 8/10/08 . chapter 1
I applaud you on a job well done, you've certainly captured the personality of Slash for me. You've really added a lot of comic elements in it, which for me is quite good, because I always need a good chuckle now and then!
Though there are some things that can be fixed. My main beef with this story is that one sentence, "I don't want to have anything to do with you, squib!" There should be an exclamation mark where the 1 is in the original sentence. Things like that are easy to miss, I understand, but you should check your story through just in case you have.
Oh, and another thing, earlier on, in the 2nd paragraph (I didn't count that first sentence as a paragraph, but whatever floats your boat) I think "I assume that is how men express their friendship" would fit better there, maybe it's just me.
All in all though, good story, and I hope to see more!