a good one

Hehe, cute. I enjoyed this, shame the movie didn't happen like this! Oh and I like your characterisation of Lilly. Great job!

i loved all the disney references!

Haha :D loved it :) which is strange, considering I was originally looking for Mia and Nicholas fics :P

Great story though, well done! :D
Zakuro

That was a terrific story! I really love your lily in this story! I also love how the characters talk about Disney plots and what not. Love how the ending went and just love this story altogether!

Loved this and I honestly wish it had ended this way as I was very fond of Andrew/Mia in the movie (more than I thought I would be) and the epilogue is a complete win!

Great job!

amazing

amazing

I really liked how the movie ended; however, I've always wonder what could have happened if Mia had given Andrew a chance,a "What if" scenario. You wrote that scenario perfectly. I liked your portrayal of the characters, and the way you carried out the story. I truly enjoyed your fic! :)

I love this pairing, thanks for writing about them! :)

Ahhhhhh you finished! It was wonderful. The bit at the end was my favorite. Huge fan of Andrew and I love when he's featured in stories. :)

YAY! You updated! I'd given up hope that this story would be finished and it was pretty disappointing, especially since it was so close to the end.

Nice job on updating and improving the ending of PD2. It still has the little moments like Mia's mother visiting and the outcry at the wedding while adapting it to your story. Good for Mia on pointing out that the rushed marriage was entirely due to Mabrey, so his objections held no water. You also built Nicholas' turnaround well, which is good because it's just bad writing to completely villanize one character to benefit another. The little moment with Andrew stepping back to allow Mia to speak and then giving her a tactful nudge at the right moment bodes well for their marriage and political partnership as well. And thank you for resisting the cliche of having Mia pregnant 1 year later. It's a more realistic happily ever after.

Thank you again for the gift of your story.

great ending to a great story liked it alot.

I can't tell you how ravenously I devoured this chapter-you would have had to see the half crazy look on my face to have an adequate idea but I can say that seeing the end to this gorgeous story is something worth having waited for. If you decide to write another story involving them I'll be only too glad to read it. Congratulations and I can't wait to see more from you!

This was marvelous! Oh my goodness, what fun! I admit, as someone who fell in love with Chris Pine a long time ago, I was skeptical, but you have wholly converted me-I love this version of Mia, of Andrew, and I think that the way that you drew their characters was fantastic! Bravo, and perfect ending!

-Tara