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Reviews For: Broken Things

Carol
2008-07-05
ch 1, anon.
abusebeautiful -- you've got it in ya. ;]
Dkd13
2008-06-17
ch 2,
abuseThis is good! Update sooner. :)
kt2785
2008-06-16
ch 2,
abuseGreat job! I really enjoyed this.
Literati and naley forever
2008-02-27
ch 1,
abuseI really like it so far, but I hope that Kate doesn't go to Jack! I'm getting so worried about Sawyer being one of the Oceanic Six, and so I like the premise for this story!
Trapped in a MatchBox
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abusethat was amazing! I can't wait to see where you go with this! Update soon!
SkateNowandForever
2008-02-24
ch 1,
abusePlease end with Skate!?
LostSista
2008-02-24
ch 1,
abuseThis was a good beginning and I'm anxious to see more. One of your lines that I loved was... “Now I know that once you step on your plane, and I step on mine, we’ll probably never see each other again. I understand that, and I accept it. But the fact is, somehow… if by some random twist of fate… the odds are just much better if we’re in the same hemisphere.” And I loved the line about how he had already offered what she's been looking for..."stability." Gosh, he so loves her, but Kate annoys me the way she yanks his chain all the time. Update soon.
Chrissytina
2008-02-24
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this!! Can't wait for more!!
hersheygal
2008-02-24
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting! I like it!
kt2785
2008-02-23
ch 1,
abuseI thought this was very in character. Great job. I can't wait for more.
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