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King of the Wasteland 8/28/08 . chapter 5
very good, i hope you start back up again soon, if your muse has gone on vacation you could always borrow mine XD
littlelostsecert 6/20/08 . chapter 5
It's great! Different from the other Jumper stories by soon, yeah?
Toxic-Neon 4/13/08 . chapter 5
awesome chapter update soon!
T. K. Ryder 4/4/08 . chapter 5
Quite nice chapter other than the senselessness thing I mentioned to you.

Finally, pallys. They were greatly missed.
FeeldaForce 4/3/08 . chapter 5
wow, i wasn't expecting that to happen but im glad that it did! I hope Alys warms up to Dylan and Griffin(again for him) becuase her life is in their hands. Chapters are like heroine, feed our addiction!
Lokelani87 4/2/08 . chapter 5
Sweet!

awaiting the next update. x]
PoPCoRn 4/2/08 . chapter 5
Wicked great chapter! So worth the wait.
prpleconverse17 4/2/08 . chapter 5
sorrying if any of my PMs sounded rude, i just luv luv luv luv luv luv luv luv your story
suspensful awesomely written update!, i heart griffin so i con't wait for more.

are you going to bring in background from Jumper: Griffin's story or are you going to make it up? either way i'm excited!

antcipatly waiting for update)
cheapxperfume 4/2/08 . chapter 5
I'm liking your version of Griffin's story quite more than the one Gould wrote himself.

Dylan's a very interesting character, I think the way Alys is handling the situation is very... real.

Keep it up. D
shadow thief wolf 4/2/08 . chapter 5
I love this story! Can't wait to read more, update soon.
Lokelani87 3/21/08 . chapter 4
oh wow, this is really cool.

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i was going to add more, but that pretty much sums it up.
can't wait for the next update!
otterwarrior16 3/19/08 . chapter 4
Love this story! Hope you update soon.
BrokenAngel1753 3/19/08 . chapter 4
CONTINUE! PLEASE P-PLEASE?
lol love the story)
T. K. Ryder 3/16/08 . chapter 4
Fine. I shall review.

Tis a good chapter, but generally when a chapter is this short, it'd be all action packed and what not.

I DEMAND ACTION PACKED!

I vote it's time for the Paladins to attack, but only after Dee arrives so he may own them with his jumping amazingness.
shadow thief wolf 3/14/08 . chapter 4
Nice chapter! I like the cop-out Griffin uses to get out of answering the question. Update soon!
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