 I am the Bad Wolf 2008-08-28 . chapter 5very good, i hope you start back up again soon, if your muse has gone on vacation you could always borrow mine XD |
 littlelostsecert 2008-06-20 . chapter 5It's great! Different from the other Jumper stories by far.update soon, yeah? |
 Toxic-Neon 2008-04-13 . chapter 5awesome chapter update soon! |
 T. K. Ryder 2008-04-04 . chapter 5Quite nice chapter other than the senselessness thing I mentioned to you.
Finally, pallys. They were greatly missed. |
 FeeldaForce 2008-04-03 . chapter 5wow, i wasn't expecting that to happen but im glad that it did! I hope Alys warms up to Dylan and Griffin(again for him) becuase her life is in their hands. Chapters are like heroine, feed our addiction! |
 Lokelani87 2008-04-02 . chapter 5Sweet!
awaiting the next update. x] |
 PoPCoRn 2008-04-02 . chapter 5 Wicked great chapter! So worth the wait. |
 prpleconverse17 2008-04-02 . chapter 5sorrying if any of my PMs sounded rude, i just luv luv luv luv luv luv luv luv your story :)
suspensful awesomely written update!, i heart griffin so i con't wait for more.
are you going to bring in background from Jumper: Griffin's story or are you going to make it up? either way i'm excited!
antcipatly waiting for update :) |
 cheapxperfume 2008-04-02 . chapter 5I'm liking your version of Griffin's story quite more than the one Gould wrote himself.
Dylan's a very interesting character, & I think the way Alys is handling the situation is very... real.
Keep it up. =D |
 shadow thief wolf 2008-04-02 . chapter 5I love this story! Can't wait to read more, update soon.^^ |
 Lokelani87 2008-03-21 . chapter 4oh wow, this is really cool.
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i was going to add more, but that pretty much sums it up. ^^
can't wait for the next update! |
 otterwarrior16 2008-03-19 . chapter 4:) Love this story! Hope you update soon. |
 BrokenAngel1753 2008-03-19 . chapter 4CONTINUE! PLEASE P-PLEASE?!
lol love the story :) |
 T. K. Ryder 2008-03-16 . chapter 4Fine. I shall review.
Tis a good chapter, but generally when a chapter is this short, it'd be all action packed and what not.
I DEMAND ACTION PACKED!
I vote it's time for the Paladins to attack, but only after Dee arrives so he may own them with his jumping amazingness. |
 shadow thief wolf 2008-03-14 . chapter 4Nice chapter!! I like the cop-out Griffin uses to get out of answering the question. Update soon!! |