very good, i hope you start back up again soon, if your muse has gone on vacation you could always borrow mine XD

It's great! Different from the other Jumper stories by soon, yeah?

awesome chapter update soon!

Quite nice chapter other than the senselessness thing I mentioned to you.

Finally, pallys. They were greatly missed.

wow, i wasn't expecting that to happen but im glad that it did! I hope Alys warms up to Dylan and Griffin(again for him) becuase her life is in their hands. Chapters are like heroine, feed our addiction!

Sweet!

awaiting the next update. x]

Wicked great chapter! So worth the wait.

sorrying if any of my PMs sounded rude, i just luv luv luv luv luv luv luv luv your story
suspensful awesomely written update!, i heart griffin so i con't wait for more.

are you going to bring in background from Jumper: Griffin's story or are you going to make it up? either way i'm excited!

antcipatly waiting for update)

I'm liking your version of Griffin's story quite more than the one Gould wrote himself.

Dylan's a very interesting character, I think the way Alys is handling the situation is very... real.

Keep it up. D

I love this story! Can't wait to read more, update soon.

oh wow, this is really cool.

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i was going to add more, but that pretty much sums it up.
can't wait for the next update!

Love this story! Hope you update soon.

CONTINUE! PLEASE P-PLEASE?
lol love the story)

Fine. I shall review.

Tis a good chapter, but generally when a chapter is this short, it'd be all action packed and what not.

I DEMAND ACTION PACKED!

I vote it's time for the Paladins to attack, but only after Dee arrives so he may own them with his jumping amazingness.

Nice chapter! I like the cop-out Griffin uses to get out of answering the question. Update soon!