Wow, another amazing story, just like the last one.
You're pretty good at the whole sci-fi scope of things, ever try writing a pr0n fic before?
I'm kinda anticipating that.
ANYWAYS, good job, the whole thing with the Narrator was interesting, and IchiRuki FTW.

That was freakin' creepy in the weirdest of ways. So cool... You, my friend, are seriously underappreciated. I loved this.

Oh that's so cruel. Awesomely cruel, lol. You've got a really unique voice and I love the way you used it to it's fullest in this story. Great job.