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| Silverleaf_Rand 2007-05-11 ch 8, anon. | abuseWOO-PAH! good story, good read. NOT to sure about the whole Ryoga thing, it almost said he was going to turn up and then didnt...Meh Good job. |
| Slade13 2003-09-19 ch 8,  | abusei know it has been about a year since you completed this fic, but i would like to say that this is one of the more well thought out and writen fics i have read. a bonus is that it is complete. there are so few complete fics out there that it is a breath of fresh air when someone does finish. good work. |
| Neo Kojiro 2003-03-31 ch 1, | abuseIn spite of all your "mad fanfic writin' skillz", you left out so many god damn details to what happened to everyone else, including the obvious question of Ryoga. Hell, even with an obvious ploy to throw Tatewaki into the mix, you failed to do that. I think a sequel is in order, or at least a "Sorry i sucked so bad at this, Kojiro" chapter. |
| Thomas 2002-08-14 ch 8, anon. | abuseGreat! What a wonderful story! I hope you write more like this one. |
| Dogmatix 2001-12-16 ch 7, anon. | abuseO.O Wow. This is a very, very good fic. You might need a proofreader if you can get hold of one, the spelling/word choice needs a bit of cleaning up(eg. Sasuke's clothes were 'immaculate', not 'miraculous', I think is what you intended to say), but the story itself is simply wonderful, way to go. *chuckle* Nice interplay between the fiancees at the end of that last chapter. Eagerly awaiting new developments. ^_^ |
| Lord Helpme 2001-10-12 ch 6, anon. | abuseMy favorite typo is 'begrudgeonly'! |
| TannimU 2001-09-23 ch 3, | abuseQuite an interesting twist! I love how Ranma's coworkers react to him and his ego. I would love to see more of Ranma, Nabiki, and Mousse. Great story and I can't wait for further chapters!! gimmme more!!!! |
| Puck Silverbreeze 2001-09-23 ch 3, | abuseAwww I like the ending.. |
| Blue_Esper 2001-09-21 ch 2, anon. | abuseOkay, where's Chris, Tillis, Reed (Leed Phoenix/Ice-man), Iria (Ilia)? Still like the story, and the fact ou killied Akne off before putting Ranma with someone else (PLEASE SAY RYOUGA'S DEAD) |
| tola 2001-09-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt does make the reader what more of the stoey |
| Blue_Esper 2001-09-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like, it's a new twist to ANY Ranma crossover. Oh and will Shou Amabane, Tillis, Iria (Ilia, the game gives two speelings, weird huh?) be in it, I know Chris will, Maybe Iceman, or is that Ranma because of his Soul-of-Ice? Can't wait for more. |