Wooooah. That was very, very... Vagrant Story. Very VS. That's probably the best way to put it. Everything about it- switching between dreams and reality, word choices, and the undeniable creepiness- was done perfectly. I loved it.

That was so very beautiful. You kept the elegant atmosphere of the game very well; at the same time, your writing flows naturally. I love the way you use parenthesis; a few times they had the effect of jolting me mentally. The story is totally believeable, and you not only kept the two of them in character, you enhanced them through your writing. Very well done!

Ahhh you crazy wench. You forced me into this game, and you create a charming masterpiece surrounding the aftermath. I adore how you portrayed ashley, and how he sent poor Syd flying.. and the sweet backflash of Tia. What can i say, another well done sceme woman)

I thought this was great! I really liked the dialog- it feels just like a part of the game! I also liked the parts that are suddenly diffrent in the story, it's confusing in an interesting way, and it helps sympathize with Ashley's confusion. I think you should continue it! I'd love to read what happens next! Keep up the great work!

Wow, this is a beautiful story. *stares in awe*

Mmm, nice... I like the glimpses into Ashley's past, and the explanation of certain nuances of Sydney's story... it's definitely good to see others' opinions on what happened, I think, and in fact this makes me think I should work on my own "interlude" fic. And of course, pets make everything better, even fanfics!)

Ah, another of those Syndey/Ashley stories! The doggy was a nice touch, you should write more!

Review! REVIEW! ...Er, anyway, awesome story. I really feel for Ashley; his whole life is a huge tragedy, and it's still going! Well...let's end on a happy note: _