 crouchingninjahiddenwolf 2009-12-05 . chapter 4are you going to continue this story? please do, it's a awesome pairing and should be done more often. |
 crouchingninjahiddenwolf 2009-12-05 . chapter 3wow, this is the hottest paring i have ever read about. way to go!! |
 crouchingninjahiddenwolf 2009-12-05 . chapter 2hehe, hana is a perv. cool story. |
 crouchingninjahiddenwolf 2009-12-05 . chapter 1heheheh, this should be a very good story. i am dying to readd more and...wait! there is more!
sque!! |
 Jits 2009-11-30 . chapter 4Great job !
I hope you write more Naruto/Hana stories in the future. ^^ |
 chaos-lord377 2009-11-30 . chapter 4this is a rocking story but is there going to be a meeting with thee family i mean you can really expand this its good |
 Jaysues 2009-11-23 . chapter 4An amazing piece of fanfiction, have you considered turning this into an epic length fanfic? I'm not joking when I say this story deserves to be extended. It's truly amazing and I'm a bit pissed you ended it before Naruto could meet the parents :P. PLEASE continue it, write a sequel if you must! Easily one of the top 10 fanfics I've ever read, and its so short :D. Ja Ne! |
 Tongues 2009-11-21 . chapter 4This story is among the best I have ever read. As an author recommended to me by one of my fellow beta readers, I expected it to be good, but this is far beyond anything I'd expected. I actually, to be honest, read this three times in a row, looking for any fault, something to hold against it... but I found no inconsistencies. Your spelling and grammar are nearly devoid of errors, and your writing style truly captures the growing romance between the two characters. The varying viewpoints, and the addition of events beyond 'normal' ninja stories is something few writers seem to be able to grasp as an important aspect for a complex but coordinated tale. In the end, this story is instantly promoted in my top 10 to number 4. I look forward to reading the rest of your fics.
Thanks for the great read,
~Tongues |
 NARUHAREM FOREVA 2009-10-10 . chapter 4hehe, REALY nice man haha |
 Aroara Moon 2009-09-28 . chapter 4I really liked it Heeh hope you con. to wright more you got talent. |
 ArrancarKage 2009-09-16 . chapter 4hey have you ever considered continuing this story in any way? send me your answer |
 T3Ko 2009-08-03 . chapter 4Great story and one of the best Naruto/Hana stories there is. Thanks for this. |
 The Last Rising Of The Phoenix 2009-07-16 . chapter 4Good story |
 Dudtheman 2009-06-27 . chapter 4love the story!this story alone has made me start hunting for other naruto and hana tails =). thanks for the awsome read hope to see a squel even though i know it won't happen a guy can hope. |
 I am Telgar 2009-06-15 . chapter 4I was half expecting Hana's mother to show up while they were having sex.I can see Tsume asking her daughter "Is this man your mate?" Or Tsuande bribing Hana if she can keep Naruto away from Tsuande. Then Tsuande will arrange a temporary office for Hana's Vet Clinic at the Hospital. I would have like to see how far you could go with this. |