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crouchingninjahiddenwolf
2009-12-05 . chapter 4
are you going to continue this story? please do, it's a awesome pairing and should be done more often.
crouchingninjahiddenwolf
2009-12-05 . chapter 3
wow, this is the hottest paring i have ever read about. way to go!!
crouchingninjahiddenwolf
2009-12-05 . chapter 2
hehe, hana is a perv. cool story.
crouchingninjahiddenwolf
2009-12-05 . chapter 1
heheheh, this should be a very good story. i am dying to readd more and...wait! there is more!
sque!!
Jits
2009-11-30 . chapter 4
Great job !
I hope you write more Naruto/Hana stories in the future. ^^
chaos-lord377
2009-11-30 . chapter 4
this is a rocking story but is there going to be a meeting with thee family i mean you can really expand this its good
Jaysues
2009-11-23 . chapter 4
An amazing piece of fanfiction, have you considered turning this into an epic length fanfic? I'm not joking when I say this story deserves to be extended. It's truly amazing and I'm a bit pissed you ended it before Naruto could meet the parents :P. PLEASE continue it, write a sequel if you must! Easily one of the top 10 fanfics I've ever read, and its so short :D. Ja Ne!
Tongues
2009-11-21 . chapter 4
This story is among the best I have ever read. As an author recommended to me by one of my fellow beta readers, I expected it to be good, but this is far beyond anything I'd expected. I actually, to be honest, read this three times in a row, looking for any fault, something to hold against it... but I found no inconsistencies. Your spelling and grammar are nearly devoid of errors, and your writing style truly captures the growing romance between the two characters. The varying viewpoints, and the addition of events beyond 'normal' ninja stories is something few writers seem to be able to grasp as an important aspect for a complex but coordinated tale. In the end, this story is instantly promoted in my top 10 to number 4. I look forward to reading the rest of your fics.
Thanks for the great read,
~Tongues
NARUHAREM FOREVA
2009-10-10 . chapter 4
hehe, REALY nice man haha
Aroara Moon
2009-09-28 . chapter 4
I really liked it Heeh hope you con. to wright more you got talent.
ArrancarKage
2009-09-16 . chapter 4
hey have you ever considered continuing this story in any way? send me your answer
T3Ko
2009-08-03 . chapter 4
Great story and one of the best Naruto/Hana stories there is. Thanks for this.
The Last Rising Of The Phoenix
2009-07-16 . chapter 4
Good story
Dudtheman
2009-06-27 . chapter 4
love the story!this story alone has made me start hunting for other naruto and hana tails =). thanks for the awsome read hope to see a squel even though i know it won't happen a guy can hope.
I am Telgar
2009-06-15 . chapter 4
I was half expecting Hana's mother to show up while they were having sex.I can see Tsume asking her daughter "Is this man your mate?" Or Tsuande bribing Hana if she can keep Naruto away from Tsuande. Then Tsuande will arrange a temporary office for Hana's Vet Clinic at the Hospital. I would have like to see how far you could go with this.
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