Basically amazing.

SPIKE
So she was just making out on a park bench with a Chaos Demon! Have you ever seen a Chaos Demon?

BUFFY
I don't think so... but go back to the part where you kidnapped Willow and Xander.

SPIKE
Oh, right. You caught that, eh?

BUFFY
It stands out a little.

Too many great little one-liners in here, but that's one of the best.

Fantastic long fic!

~AnononA

THAT WAS MAD. your story was really good i hope you rite a sequal or sumfin to continue this story.

I love your story. If i didn't know any better i would have thought that really happened on the show. I really enjoy your work.

:) Coulda been a script. Caught the characters perfectly.

Wow.. that was some great dialogue! Loved it.

!!!!!!!AHHHHH!!!!ILOVEYOURSTORY!!!!I can't stop smiling! It was the best!!! Keep writing!!!

Oh, if only season 6 could have gone like this! Delightful read. Great characterization and all very easy to imagine. Thanks.

I look forward to reading more stories from you in the future.

Best regards,
Dez

This is one of my favorite stories, I've re-read it several times now. You are very true to Buffy and Spike. You tell a fairly intricate story in a clear, concise and believable way. I don't suppose that you will write a sequel someday...please?

Congratulations on writing a wonderful story!

Brilliant.
Characterisations, syntax, dialog...all of an extraordinary standard.
More. Now.

What a perfectly perfect story! In fact, **all your stories are true gems, your Shaken series being an absolute masterpiece of excellent writing! Keep the B/S stories coming!!!! PLEASE!!!!!:-))))

I *love* this story more than chocolate! (and that's saying something) You write a great piece of S/B!

That was one of the best B/S stories I've ever read!! Keep up the good work!

Aww i loved it! very cute!

Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great story and beautifully written!!!!!!!!!!