Excellent! I love your writing and I am so glad you write my favorite CSI pairing! There is not enough fic for these two and you write them so beautifully!
Wonderful character voices, very believable. I especially love this final chapter the tone is great and I felt very caught up in the story. I hope to see you return to writing this pairing!

That was brilliant!

You write great Gil/Greg CSI stories, and I do hope you continue with this one and finish it somehow..

Sincerely,

good start to the story. It really put Gil ina position to question what he really wants. I look forward to the next chapter.

o my god,

Let John will not prevent them to be together.

Oh god oh god Oh god oh god !

It's a interesant twist but also it looks like Gil is a bit blind and John is either trying to help him break up with Greg or be with Greg.

And I'm nost sure which one I would like XD

And now for a strident fan! MORE PLEASE!

Interesting story... update pleaz)