Very good! Write more! _

Sob! (Blows nose loudly) Maybe I'm exaggerating here...but this is very sad and emotional. So... exquisite. (Breaks down again...sweatdrop...)

How sweet!

Very Aya-chany, *sniff* Wahhhh!*sniff
Sayonara,

Kat

Short and very sweet. Line repetition used corrrctly can make a piece powerfully, and you followed it to the letter. The obligatory references to Sae and Nanaka were an excellent part of this as well. Wonderful work _

;_; That was so sad/sweet. I loved it! _ great writing!

Awwww! Poor Aburatsubo! I always did feel sorry for him...

Poor Aburatsubo! I liked the repetition. The first person style was very nice too.

*sniff* Okay, I read the first 2 sentances and allready I'm totally pitiful for dearest Aburatsubo. This is so great

Very nice analysis of Aburatsubo. Melikes!

I loved your fanfic, though short, it really incorporated the hopelessness of Aburatsubo's lust for Takeo.

Jouzu desu ne... I really liked this fanfic, it was really sweet. Poor Aburatsubo...

Wow, great. It sounds just like what I think Aburatsubo would say. Hey, so, you like Mahou Tsukai Tai? You should come check out my website ( . ), and consider posting some of your fanfiction there. There aren't too many Mahou Tsukai sites on the internet yet, at least, not ones that are updated, so if you're a fan, please support the ones that are. Anyway, I really liked your fic. Aburatsubo and Akane are my favorite characters.

very good story i liek it very iC and od to teh plot keep writing

Woah, that was so true to Aburatsubo's character, yet so heartfelt. I'm really impressed. I hope you write more MTT stuff _