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kyrandiana 2008-05-17 ch 3,	abusetis good i cannot wait for more
shetlandlace 2008-05-15 ch 3,	abuseDon't worry, James, just when you think it can't get any worse--it will! Great chapter...loved that it was from James' POV. Things are looking bad for our favorite couple, but I have faith that you'll fix it.
Cherrykisses21 2008-05-15 ch 3,	abusethis is a great story
Jasper Hale 2008-05-15 ch 3,	abusethis is amazing! i really cant wait for the next chapter!!
NOT AFRAID OF SPIDERS! GO M... 2008-03-03 ch 2, anon.	abuseThis is good... I'm gonna give you an idea, but you probably won't like it. The twins can go in Gryffindor, because A: Pierre is even more protective of his twin, and they shouldn't be apart, and B: Arienne could be a humorous annoyance to James (I'm so cruel) Arabelle seems pretty cunning (not evil exactly), so she should be in Slytherin (What will the Potters think?!?!). She becomes friends with the purebloods and Snape, who as we know still loves Lily. She sees the connection between Lily and James, feels threatened, and plans to separate them. Snape helps, somehow hoping to get her back as his amigo. It's just an idea, if you hate it, that's cool...
cosmopolitan 2008-02-28 ch 1,	abusejust a little note: "Je peux faire comme je s'il vous plait, Pierre" means 'i can d as you please, pierre' you really want to be careful with those translators, i'd reccommend the google one though, while no translator is fantastic that is by far one of the best out there although, i've also seen writers have peopel translate for them to avoid the mistakes, you cna have someone do that for you- i could if you'd like -- fun fic, btw, lookign foreward to reading more
shetlandlace 2008-02-27 ch 2,	abuseFor some reason I don't want them in Gryffindor--either Raveclaw or Hufflepuff. Feeling feisty tonight, I guess. Now that I think about it their house may be an issue with the rest of the story--so do whatever serves the story best. If the heads--James & Lily are going to have separate quarters that would set up some great situations for Arabelle, James & Lily. I think that Pierre should NOT fall for Lily, but become more like a friend or a brother. James wouldn't like that much because he resents the fact that Pierre hates him. Why does Pierre hate him? Is there a guy in France that loves Arabelle, or that she loves? What about the sister? I've probably asked more than I've answered, but hopefully some of that will help you! This was a good chapter--I liked the interplay between Lily & Pierre. I also know how she feels--not moving an inch, the trolley can come to me! Been there, done that! :-)
bookworm2butterfly 2008-02-27 ch 2,	abuseI think Pierre should be in Gryffindor because he traveled from Paris to England all to keep an eye on his sisters, he seems like he would do anything for them. Arabelle in Ravenclaw, because she seems smart enough and I don't want her in the same house as Lily and James :P Arienne should be in Hufflepuff...she seems like a follower, and not smart enough for Ravenclaw and not brave enough for Gryffindor. Well those are my thoughts, update again soon, and keep up the good work!
JamesHEARTLily 2008-02-27 ch 2,	abuseI like it :) Keep going, DEFINITELY. And make ALL your chapters this long ;)
siabrach 2008-02-27 ch 2,	abusegreat story... i can't wait for the next update- its v interesting and you write very well :)
kyrandiana 2008-02-27 ch 2,	abusearabelle should be put into gryffindor just to annoy james, pierre should be put in ravenclaw and his twin in slytheren or hufflepuff but dont put the 3 kids in the same house it would annoy pierre however another angle is to put lily and james in a head dorm together where only they could enter. so james could escape from arabelle. or to put another angel on it is to have arabelle be in slythern and being chasing james like he does lily and when he is in the heads common room after escaping arabelle sitting down on the couch where lily is already sitting james takes his glasses off and stares at the fire and says to Lily "now i know how you feel or felt about me chasing you and im sorry if i drive or drove you nuts. that girl (as in arabelle ) is insane
Comicrileef 2008-02-27 ch 2,	abuseyes! an update! well great chapter. i think that arabelle should be in hufflepuff. she seems a bit air-heady to me, and no offense to the hufflepuffs, but i don't think she would fit in the other houses. pierre and arienne would probably be in ravenclaw or gryffindor. comicrileef
anonymous jane 2008-02-27 ch 2, anon.	abusecan i have pierre? he sounds so hot! lol. i love him. i know that james has to be with lily though, and frank has to be paired with alice, but i don't know whether you should do anymore pairings (just a suggestion. it gets too corny when everyone has their special someone). and here's what i feel about the sorting situation: it might be easier on you if you make them all in the same house so they can interact with each other more, but you know, whatever floats your boat. update soon s'il vous plait.
shetlandlace 2008-02-25 ch 1,	abuseUnique story! You hooked me, I want to know what comes next. Great start.
blueyblonde 2008-02-25 ch 1,	abusevery good story i love it

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