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NocturnalFerri 2008-11-30 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh. I really like this story. After sifting through a whole mess of blah Naruto stories, I stumbled upon yours. And, man, was I relieved and greatful. I'm really enjoying how you handle the characters. Nicely kept IC but older and mature. I especially like the serious discussion on Naruto's strategy to become hokage. You don't see much of that in stories. Can't wait to read the rest! Keep up the great work!
Kat Morning 2008-11-17 . chapter 6
This is one of the cutest things I've ever read ... ever. And I've never tried a Naruto/Sakura story, but now I'm glad I did. Either the pairing is a lot cuter than I was expecting, or you're just a really good writer. Both? Option 2? Not sure. But I'm pretty much just sitting here grinning like a loon with the warm and the fuzzy.
Mitchy 2008-10-29 . chapter 1
and comment i shall!Ü wonderful, wonderful chapter.., i knew you write this well that now im rooting for sakura and naruto...adding this to my favorites!
Paosheep 2008-10-19 . chapter 6
This story feels... honest? I guess?

I dunno, but I really like it. It's like... sincere, and... reliable.

That made absolutely no sense, I know. But I do like this story a lot, and look forward to more.
honey-vanilla11 2008-10-15 . chapter 6
such a wonderful story!! filled with witty humor and lots of enjoyable moments!! i read it in just one sitting!! ^_^ i hope you update it very soon! keep it up!
swordbunny4486 2008-10-10 . chapter 6
this is awesome and the neiji-chan thing cracked me up.
crimsonstain 2008-10-05 . chapter 6
Amazing story you have here! So, keep up the good work, and update soon!
Kushina 2008-10-04 . chapter 1
I hereby dub thy work: "Awesomeness"! So PLEASE wirte more? For me?
C-sa 2008-10-01 . chapter 6
I love this fic! You've written it so beautifully that I do hope you manage to find time to continue writing. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors :)
poornmiserable 2008-09-29 . chapter 6
aw i love naruto sakura they are so cute together just wanted to say how much i enjoy your fic please update soon with the last(?) chapter keep up the great work
Muse of Riot 2008-09-27 . chapter 6
The story is awsome ^^ Please continue!
ComboBreaker 2008-09-26 . chapter 6
Amazing! You're very skilled as a writer, and I really enjoy the story. The characters dont seem to be OOC and it just has really good pacing.

Keep up the good work!
won't be the Victim 2008-09-24 . chapter 6
I love you story! It is wonderfully writen the characters are awsome! The paring the best! And just wow! Can't wait for the rest! Please update you amazing story soon:)
Vesta J.C. 2008-09-22 . chapter 5
Okay..I realize this isn't a typo, but you constantly spell 'lose' and 'loose'.
Pushing that aside...

OMG!! CUTE CHAPTER!! *SQUEAL!!* I LOVEE the conversation between Temari and Sakura...the way you present Temari, especially..you really make most of the characters in the story likable. Temari was doing a good job as Sakura's friend on the the girlieness ans such. (ew..'girlieness' looks weird ._.)
Anyway, I really appreciate the detail put into the story..it makes it look like you really did put the time and effort into it (hell this is like 75 pages long! hehe). Plus all the political stuff..yeah good stuff..
Again, really cute and informative chapter. I love it!
Vesta J.C. 2008-09-21 . chapter 3
Wtf!! You won't believe how much I am enjoying this.
I'm about laughing right now...the story is getting so cute! I like how everything unfolds, but what I don't like is how things just happen without us even knowing what the hell is going on. On the positive side of that, though, we're getting the slice of life picture in those in-between moments..though I would've loved to hear from Kakashi! It progresses in such a way that you wouldn't normally expect it (I'm still not sure whether on that's a good thing or not), and it's just so..interesting!
As people were pairing up Hinata or Ino with Naruto, I was still stuck on the original hope-to-be pairing. IMO, Sakura and Naruto have really good chemistry. I always play out their personalities in my head, and how nicely they would go together. I didn't really think Sasuke and Sakura were a good pair from the start..it was kind of obvious, no matter how much things change.

Anyway, back to your story. In this chapter especially, I noticed several errors, grammatically, and occasionally a spelling mistake. Sometimes you'd skip words or type in the wrong word, but it's nothing too major when you're stuck on the story! ^^
I'm pretty impressed with this so far, and I keep wondering what will happen next. This is very drifty-offy from what you'd expect to occur during some situations, and I was excited when Lee came in! He's adorable :D (notice how I suddenly drift away from what i was saying.. T.T ..get used to it, I change the subject way too fast! hehe) And Gaara! Though he didn't seem exactly like himself..
Overall, you still have me hooked! :D Good Work!
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