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| Angel-eyes56 2008-08-20 ch 63,  | abuseI think Riku on the right track that Juumonji has a crush on Sena. It fits all the hot, sexy, dangerous guys always fit with the cute, innocent guys. It always amuse me that Tetsuma just at the right time during the beach game. It is a bit scare how dedicated he is but always good for a laugh. |
| kyothefallenkit 2008-08-20 ch 63, | abusehehe poor naive Sena-chan X3 Please update soon! |
| flit 2008-08-20 ch 63, anon. | abuse*dancing and laughter and whe!* more fic :D yay! |
| unheardcries 2008-08-20 ch 63, | abuseLOL. These lines: "There was a long pause before the inevitable happened. “Huh?” “Huuh?!” “Huh?!” " That made me laugh. Update soon! |
| cyne 2008-08-19 ch 63, | abuseOnce again, I adore, absolutely adore, this story. Thanks for the 63 chapters you have written so far and I look forward to more. One question I have, and I apologize if male/male relationships are offensive to you, but I was wondering if that was one of the directions this story might turn regarding Sena? From what I have read so far it seems like a very real possibility. Not that I mind since the only Eyeshield 21 stories I read contain m/m pairings. Just thought I would ask. Once again thank you cyne |
| akuma-river 2008-08-19 ch 63, | abuse*headdesk* Some parts of E21 is really really really stupid...I tend to try to blot those moments from my mind...beach football in Houston is just one of those... Riku though has a point, though, why did Juumonji (I keep pronouncing it Jumanji in my head, damn Robin Williams film) walk over there? Jealousy? I wonder what Agon-san would say to Riku's assumptions. ;d |
| Lazy-ass-Ninja 2008-08-19 ch 63, | abuseyay! an update :D School sucks... I mean i'm looking forward to seeing my friends on a more regular basis but at the same time i'm gonna mis staying up until 4 or 5 in the morning. Wondeful update as always ^_^ LAN~ |
| White Ivy 2008-08-19 ch 63, | abuseDoes Kuroki have a crush on Sena?! Does Juumonji or Toganou? |
| HiurSena fan 2.0 2008-08-19 ch 63, anon. | abusewhat you won't bee updateding as much becuse of school? Nno...o...o! But you'll still be updating right? Right...(cunsornd voice) Flash// do you take requests for the story(not big ones)? |
| 15385bic 2008-08-19 ch 63, | abuseit sometimes does seem like jumonji has a crush on tsuna :P - and riku is really into his big bro role |
| firedraygon 2008-08-19 ch 63, | abuseAnd Riku's out of the competition! Haha, who's still in? Juumonji, Agon, Hiruma, Shin...Sheesh, Sena has lots of guys vying for his attention. It's so cute. Great chapter. Please write more soon! ~fd97 |
| unheardcries 2008-08-18 ch 62, | abuseOh dear, Hiruma and his amazing guns. hahhaha Update soon! Great chapter, BTW. |
| unheardcries 2008-08-18 ch 60, | abuseThe moment between Sena and Hiruma is so cute. + favourites |
| unheardcries 2008-08-18 ch 48, | abuseLOL this chapter is hilarious! Agon is so soft on Sena! =D When I read Sephiroth, I just burst out laughing. Hahhaa |
| unheardcries 2008-08-18 ch 30, | abuseYay Riku arrives~! I love your story so far, by the way. Shout out for Riku! |