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| Delilah Kelley 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseGood story, I enjoyed it. Especially the food fight. Jake is well characterized, we could all imagine he behaved like that back at the orphanage. Good idea to have draft a story about that dry white toast stuff. Keep on writing, we need more Blues Brothers fanfic writers ! |
| Jo Z. Pierce 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was a lot of fun! I can picture Elwood hiding out that way, too! Nice! I love young Blues Brothers stories! One small detail - Jake wouldn't be known as Joliet Jake yet. It's unclear when he gets the name, as far as I know, but it's too early here. Unless... maybe someone had a strong feeling...? Please write more BB fic! |