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Reviews For: The Story of Toast

Delilah Kelley
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseGood story, I enjoyed it. Especially the food fight. Jake is well characterized, we could all imagine he behaved like that back at the orphanage.

Good idea to have draft a story about that dry white toast stuff.

Keep on writing, we need more Blues Brothers fanfic writers !
Jo Z. Pierce
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseThat was a lot of fun! I can picture Elwood hiding out that way, too! Nice! I love young Blues Brothers stories!

One small detail - Jake wouldn't be known as Joliet Jake yet. It's unclear when he gets the name, as far as I know, but it's too early here. Unless... maybe someone had a strong feeling...?


Please write more BB fic!
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