 Aosugiru Sora 2009-01-02 . chapter 1“Mr. Mustang, you are about to learn why the children on the block call me the ‘Hawk’s Eye’.”
This line was so funny :) Great story, and I like how you captured the situation in that last paragraph. |
 MoonStarDutchess 2008-09-14 . chapter 1AH! I remember reading this a few months ago. Don't know why I didn't review then. *shrugs*
This is very cute! |
 angelicat123 2008-04-24 . chapter 1very sweet :)
i like the little end thing. |
 xlillypotterx 2008-04-20 . chapter 1Aw, that was very, very fluffy. Yay for cute Royai!! Thanks for making me smile. I especially like the imagery of the snow and the last few lines before the break. :) |
 Ruingaraf 2008-03-02 . chapter 1Aww, cute. I especially loved 'vaguely entertained thoughts such as whether bushes got cold' and "You knock me face first into the snow and you still call me Mr. Mustang?"
XD |
 winglessfairy25 2008-02-26 . chapter 1Aw.. That was uberly sweet. Good work!
Erinn~ |
 Kurissyma san Tybalt 2008-02-25 . chapter 1AW!! You rock, Sophie-chan!! *huggles* YAY ROYAI!! |
 InuyashaLuver1224 2008-02-25 . chapter 1This is cute. Why Mr. Mustang? And why would Hawkeye's father care about her back? |
 demonalchemist5 2008-02-24 . chapter 1 That was cute! Great work. |
 xXWishesxX 2008-02-24 . chapter 1Aw so cute! So much fluff; I absolutely loved it! |