 it's simply me 2009-10-17 . chapter 1That was great! I really enjoyed that, and it helps that the grammar is flawless and all. I've been really craving a story like this for some time now, so I'm glad you've written it. OH, and the style was perfect, unique, too.
So ya, great story! ^-^ |
 funkydelic sid 2009-10-08 . chapter 1Woohoo! That was wonderful. I have a weird obsession with the lovely Tonnere, (ooh, hey, random fact, Eclair Tonnere can translate into the words 'thunder' and 'lightening' the two things Haruhi is most afraid of) and I think that she is such a strange character, and so strange. But yes, that story was really spectacular. |
 microw-ve 2009-04-15 . chapter 1This was sad, in that strange uplifting manner. I really love how you structured it, alternating from italics to normal text. The character is spot-on, it's as if her own hands typed the words; I applaud you, it's great! Now to add to my Faves list. |
 Sakiru Yume 2009-01-02 . chapter 1The way that you wrote this was actually rather interesting. I liked it. If I find a way to use it, may I steal that way of writing? :) |
 Shirakawa Myself 2008-06-22 . chapter 1This is fantastic, and I truly mean that. It's enchanting and psychological in ways, and it's so utterly real. I love the way the story is woven, with the italicised lines and normal print, and this is such an amazing insight into the life of a character who has so much depth but nobody to share it with.
Your empathy with Eclair Tonnere is amazing; you have got right into her mind and burrowed around and then produced a story so fitting until the last tiny detail.
It's wonderful to have this view, from the outside and somebody who wants in but won't admit it, of the Host Club and especially Tamaki. I think WOW just about covers it =D |
 SylverEyes 2008-06-21 . chapter 1I find Eclair fascinating. There's so much that you could do with her, and no one ever bothers to even try. You, however, have done a wonderful job of digging more deeply into the character that is Eclair.
I really, really like this. I know that this style is experimental, and it does look like it would take a long time to do, but it helps get your point across in this.
Very cute; I've always wondered if Eclair really did love Tamaki, and I think that she did, but I can never be absolutely sure. You've helped cement that theory, however. :D
I have a similar idea; do you mind if I still write it out anyways?
Well, this was great, and I'm going to need to check out some of your other stuff. ^_^ |
 Amazonian21 2008-06-18 . chapter 1I liked this- it's a very sympathetic and realistic study. Well done. |
 Solemn Euphoria 2008-04-29 . chapter 1Wow, way to make Eclair a charater you empathize with!
This story is really good. Kudos! |
 Avid Adrenaline 2008-04-16 . chapter 1Hmm, a lovely piece. The italics and regular style was interesting, and a little funny how it turned the serious and average into humorous. Especially Tamaki's cell phoen part. I loved that. ^^
I like how you gave a new perspective on the often hated character. |
 bazoo 2008-02-28 . chapter 1that is a beautiful, lovely interpretation of a character that nobody liked lol. thank you for the great tale. i hope you continue with the ouran writing. or any writing, it's difficult to find clear concise fanfiction that is written with determination, accurate spelling, proper grammar and most of all, imagination.
thank you. |
 Hickumu 2008-02-27 . chapter 1Yatta! Good job; I wasn't even quite sure when this was and I liked the writing. Definitely a good start in the Ouran Genre...where I have never DARED tread...shojo still scares me. |
 Meanae 2008-02-26 . chapter 1This is a really well done drabble. I love how you seperate what is happening in the real world compared to her thoughts. I love your look on Eclair and the fact that you didn't bash her either. You took a person we saw at a bad time and made her a human. Good work.
Meanae |
 fuga 2008-02-25 . chapter 1 Wow... You showed us Eclair. I can really see her like that. It was so real..^^ |