I feel like I've read this story somewhere before, but if I did, then I neglected to leave a review [better late than never, I'm hoping]. Anyways, this is definitely now one of my favorite Ronon/Teyla fics, I love the little quirks about them you wove in here, it really worked. ^^

cute! love it :)

Damn good writing

aw so sweet! made a little tear come to my eye :D

That was really lovely :)

Not a Ronon/Teyla shipper but am a fan of fantastic writing, so had to say something because your writing in this fic is just so beautiful! Love the puzzle image, love the 'time markers' given for their relationship and the deeply romantic feel behind the whole thing. Wow, and thanks x

Aw! How sweet was that!! Really cute! :D Great job!
I loved how you each time said how long ago it was, like here: 'It was three months since their trysts had begun, and three weeks since the others had discovered the secret.'
:D

Well done! :)

Oh. My. Gosh. *falls into squeeing fangirl mode*

This is, I think one of THE BEST Ronon/Teyla stories I have EVER read. I love the dynamic between them, it is just so *right* for them. I also love how you likened their relationship to a puzzle; I can very easily see that complicated pattern to them, but how easily all the pieces fall into place at the end. ^_^

I also love Ronon's fascination with Teyla's hair. I'm not sure why that in particular struck me as hard as it did, perhaps it's because I had long hair for many years of my life and enjoyed wearing it braided. But I really, really like that. I also love their little interplays, their back-and-forthing with each other in relaxation no matter where they were or what they were doing. I also very much like that he told her about Melena; I think that would be a very important aspect to their relationship -- Teyla knowing he had someone in his past, and respecting that, like she did here.

This fic was beautiful. I loved every word of it, and I sincerely hope you right more -- you've got Ronon/Teyla down to perfection! ^_^ I'll be on the lookout for more R/T fics from you in the future!

*hugs*

~fyd~

Lovely story. I don't usually ship Ronon with Teyla, but I could so see this happen. The way you portrayed the characters and their dialogue were spot on. Glad you decided to do an SGA fanfic, please write more!

OMG!! I loved it!! It was so cute!

Jayna
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