argh this whole damn thing is just one big cliffhanger i'm banging my head on the keyboard here i need more i tell you more! please, i just love this!

o seph can be so heartless sometimes, he needs a good kick up the arse!

Do you speak finnish or is "Sydän" something in some other language? :)
just had to ask ^^

Oh, very interesting. I'll have to watch this one.

A very good chapter, even though it was quite short. The way it moved made up for the size though, I believe. Cloud did 'steal' this chapter for me, you seem to be getting much better at writing his character, or at least much better at masking your disdain for him. I found the set up to be very good and I shall patiently await the next chapter.

-_-loved it! please update soon!-_-

I REALLY liked this chapter. Cloud was definitly written, at least in my opinion, the best in a serious situation that you've ever written him. I loved the way you've set the next chapter up, and I can hardly wait for it! Angry Zack is still hard to read, but I think you did it well, though Leon I think was the only weak character in this chapter, but not by much. You really found a way to make this chapter flow and it was paced well, it never got bogged down, though it was short. It just keeps getting better :)

I'm really enjoying this now. Good solid complex plotting to get your teeth into.

I have to be honest and say I didn't like chapter 1 very much - it was a bit too abruptly 'here's the premise' I felt. However, THIS chapter is an entirely different kettle of fish. You know how I feel about Leon/Riku, so you can probably guess what this did to me! Very very moving, and really quite wonderfully written, especially the dialogue.

ToT
YOU UPDATED!
I love this story so much~ And I like how this plot is very gradual instead of jumping into things. And Reno being included makes me smile
I have nothing bad to say about this story.
(On that note, I would be the worst editor ever)

Okay, this is kinda scary, especially Sephiroth portrays as a psychopath. Keep it up!

I kinda don't like stories where Seph is all psycho and stuff but there are a few exceptions to that, such as this story. *laughs* Reno is smarter than anyone gives him credit for. I can't wait for the next update.

-_-GASP! poor riku! please update soon!-_-

I think that you portrayed the emotions really well.
And I smell an awesome plot brewing~
:D

Ooh, the evil plot is unveiled! haha, I really liked this chapter, it was gripping. I LOVED Reno's part...'doesn't take a genious'. Anyway, I really liked this chapter, it flowed really well and I loved the interactions.