This is pretty good. It's the first 'Squall dies, leaving Rinoa alone' story that i've read, though :P. It's a bit hard to imagine Rinoa being tough and cold, but I can accept it, I guess. I liked the scene with her father.

Cool. Actually, Shiva has more compatibility with Quistis from the beginning.

(Heh heh he...: This is so good! I really do hope you continue this. Sorry if I haven't reviewed before (I have a really bad habit of not doing that...) but I read the two before and I really liked those too. Keep writing, you have great talent!

That was a wonderful story, very well written. Sometimes depending on my mood, I try to avoid stories revolving around death. Nonetheless, this was so ethereal and mysterious I found myself wanting to continue. I think one of the most stirring parts was near the end when Raine referred to Rinoa has her daughter and Rinoa thinking she did have a family after all. This was a thrilling, suspenseful story, thank you.

Again, it's very well written. You have me hooked. I especially liked the interaction between Laguna and Rinoa, and Rinoa and Raine, as well. I've read (and reviewed!) all three of your stories, and I hope that's motivation enough for you to continue... so... See you around!

Aw, that was a really good story. Is there another one in this little Squinoa series? I'm gonna go and have a look...

Wow...I really liked this one too. Great job!

Hehe, Rinoa's Nancy Drew for Halloween. xD I love it! This mini-series thing was a great idea, and I love the take you have on Raine's death. I always wondered about that...in a town like Winhill, the possibilities were endless. I'm glad you took that idea and ran with it.
Great story!

I don't think Rinoa's too much OOC, she did "inherit" part of Squall's attitude, anyway. This is a grwat story, I hope you continue soon!

Wow! I think Rinoa acted perfectly like she should. She's definitely not herself! I can't wait to read the next story.

No, Rinoa's not OOC ... considering everything she's going through... It's not as poignant as 'Two Hearts' but I like it all the same.

Another great story. I feel so sorry for Rinoa. Good job!

HOLY...Wow this is great, I feel so sorry for Rinoa and I never really liked her for some odd reason. Wow u made my change my mind quick! This is awsome, plz continue! BTW, I dun think shes OOC after all, Squall is apart of he ya know?

My goodness, I love this little plot idea you had. It was so very original, and I went back to read the first one tonight and thought, "You know, she really should have made a sequel to this." Then I scrolled through your stories, and I saw it, and I was like, "WAH! Must read!" xDD
I think this is actually really good! I like how Rinoa picked up Squall's physical and personality traits. I can't say I wouldn't be kind of scared of her if she looked like that and acted like that, lol, but I still felt really sorry for her. I think you did a splendid job for a sequel. It goes on my Favorites List too. Great job!

Goodness.. this was certainly tragic, definitely different like you said but still completely original. Somehow I can't get that image out of my head.. great job.