|Reviews for Tiny Little Fractures|
| steadfast 2/23/13 . chapter 2
Love the story, thanks!
| Limaro 12/18/12 . chapter 2
I miss this show. I think it's time for a Netflix marathon. Early seasons with the original team only. You write them all brilliantly.
I was touched by General Hammond's reaction. And Teal'c and Daniel's too.
This was better than a lot of episodes, and more satsfying for my 'shippin' heart, too.
| Limaro 12/18/12 . chapter 1
This is so good!
| Kris Morene 6/15/11 . chapter 2
Beautiful story, excellent characterization! Thanks for a great read!
| elleelle 11/13/10 . chapter 2
aww. their relationship was great in this fic
| elleelle 11/13/10 . chapter 1
oh wow. you have me on the edge of my seat
| Julimond 1/15/10 . chapter 2
Beautiful! Actually made me cry. In a good way. A very realistic take on how Sam and Jack's story might have happened. Loved it!
| Amilyn 1/5/10 . chapter 2
I thought for sure I'd commented before on this excellent story. I love the pacing, the description of the city and culture, the description of how *easy* Carter and Daniel are with each other. I like the way you draw the tension between Carter and Jack, and the awkward way their desire to keep what they have with SG1 conflicts with their personal desires. I love Daniel's anger at Jack and Teal'c's acceptance. Well done story (as usual).
| remerkaba 2/18/09 . chapter 2
I just found your story and really enjoyed it. Very nice job. I thought you did everyone very well and kept the characters very true to character. Very nicely written and enjoyable story.
| sapphtastic 2/9/09 . chapter 2
Ah, what a lovely little fic. And best of all, now Etepay can't happen. Brings a smile to my face. Poor Sam, though. She and Jack just can't do anything painlessly, can they?
| Lex Kitten 2/5/09 . chapter 2
This was brilliant! This is such a good plot idea, I honestly kept telling myself that the SG writers should have thought of this and done it themselves! (Though, of course, their version would be more funny, and much less melodramatic and shippy P!)
You had all the characters *spot on*. Jack was particularly good in the "trial"(?) scene. You phrased his anger just right ; it sounded very in character.
Thanks so much for witting!
| lillyrush88 1/18/09 . chapter 2
Awesome! I love the storyline, the way you describe O'Neills thoughts and your way of writing anyway.
Keep on uploading new stories :-D
| leiasky 9/12/08 . chapter 2
I'm not normally a fan of AU's but I really liked this.
| LY00 6/14/08 . chapter 2
Wow, great story. You really capture the subtleties of their relationship and the way it fits into the team. And a happy ending! Well done. Thanks for writing.
| Entropic Cascade 6/13/08 . chapter 2
Okay...wow! I loved this fic. It's just the right balance of irreverent and loving. There are too many S&J stories out there that don't take into account the looks and reading between the lines, but you always manage it so well.
I thought that the voices were true, and messy - that is the perfect description of the situation!