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| nyakattia 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseI liked the idea for this story, but there was just one thing that bugged me- the l word. Because I really don't think they would say it to each other before they were in a relationship (or even for some time after), especially Stella, given her long history of abandonment and psychotic ex boyfriends. I would have preferred if you had Stella admit that she wouldn't mind f**king him. :P Or that she thought he was hot. I really don't mean to put the story down, but I have issues with that word. :P |
| citeyoursource 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet story. I love how you added Danny and Lindsay in for us too. =) Two of my favorite ships. Great story. |
| CarolinaH.Manning 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseperfect. I can so see Lindsay staging something like that. and last part was just sweet and hot |
| Debavill 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseOOH loved that.. Very clever... |
| Aphina 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseLinds is wicked, I had to laugh at that. Your whole story made me smile! |
| chocoADDICTED 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abusethat was awesome =D |
| KickassScot 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseAww! nice & sweet & fluffy just the way I like it! |
| mandy9578 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI was laughing so hard at that OMG-Please-let-the-ground-open-up-and-swallow-me-now moment. What a riot. Anyway, this was so sweet all in all. Loved it. :) |
| TwistedSister03 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abusethat was very cute! great job =] |
| ThnksFrThMmrs87 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is me sighing. So sweet. I would love to see Stella and Lindsay totally blasted too, not gonna lie |
| feathergirl926 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseGreat fic! I love that they both had the same doubts. And the fact that Lindsay was never really drunk? Priceless, lol. |
| gwen24 2008-02-25 ch 1, | abuseloved it loved it loved it! i love sneaky lindsay. 'oops' hilarious!! |