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nyakattia
2008-02-28
ch 1,
abuseI liked the idea for this story, but there was just one thing that bugged me- the l word. Because I really don't think they would say it to each other before they were in a relationship (or even for some time after), especially Stella, given her long history of abandonment and psychotic ex boyfriends. I would have preferred if you had Stella admit that she wouldn't mind f**king him. :P Or that she thought he was hot.
I really don't mean to put the story down, but I have issues with that word. :P
citeyoursource
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseVery sweet story. I love how you added Danny and Lindsay in for us too. =) Two of my favorite ships.
Great story.
CarolinaH.Manning
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseperfect. I can so see Lindsay staging something like that. and last part was just sweet and hot
Debavill
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abuseOOH loved that.. Very clever...
Aphina
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abuseLinds is wicked, I had to laugh at that. Your whole story made me smile!
chocoADDICTED
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abusethat was awesome =D
KickassScot
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abuseAww! nice & sweet & fluffy just the way I like it!
mandy9578
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abuseI was laughing so hard at that OMG-Please-let-the-ground-open-up-and-swallow-me-now moment. What a riot. Anyway, this was so sweet all in all. Loved it. :)
TwistedSister03
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abusethat was very cute! great job =]
ThnksFrThMmrs87
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abuseThis is me sighing. So sweet. I would love to see Stella and Lindsay totally blasted too, not gonna lie
feathergirl926
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abuseGreat fic! I love that they both had the same doubts. And the fact that Lindsay was never really drunk? Priceless, lol.
gwen24
2008-02-25
ch 1,
abuseloved it loved it loved it! i love sneaky lindsay. 'oops' hilarious!!
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